Wow! Thank you for listening so attentively.
You managed to hear the C/E inversion, you have an incredible ear (perfect pitch?).
It's great to have your analysis. It's very informative.
You're absolutely right about the sharpness of the attacks. As an aside, the second section was weak because of the lack of attack on the strings. It took me a while to realize that I shouldn't play louder, but shorter and sharper. I corrected part of it, but I didn't have time to do it properly everywhere.
I'm really impressed by the accuracy of your feedback. Thank you again for taking the time to listen and, above all, to comment.