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Hello! It's not dropped! I'm currently trying to improve my writting and making changes in both stories, so I'm rewriting things and I hope to update soon!

I also plan on giving sneak peaks of the changes in tumblr soon! byee <3

Hey! 

Hm, I can change the paragraph to be only one person talking. ( Iwas just scared of being too many short paragraphs but it might make it easier to read.)

and for the '...' , i tend to use those when the character is not speaking but thinking, dunno, I might keep it or change it.

Thanks for the feedback<3

Thank youu! <333

Glad you enjoyed it!

Oh,  I tried on mobile and it was scrolling down normaly when i tested. But I'll try to see if there's something wrong!

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Own thank!

(i forgot to open itchi.io this days...And the coincidence, I'm seeing your comment on the day i did a poll on tumblr to, maybe, change the story )

I do have some trouble with double letters ksksks i'll try to be more attentive about it! 

And thanks!! glad you like it, i hope to update it soon! <33

It's not abandoned kksks 

i swear i'll try to update it soon, but my main focus is my other story!

Thanks! I'll fix it 💕

Yeah, 16 but some characters ages may change and MC's age too, i'm making a few changes at their backstories and other things.

Thanks!! <3

I get it....ksksk i had a lot fun writting it.

Hi!

I'm working on adding some breaks on the paragraphs, because you're right it makes a little weird and tiring to read, and I completely forgot to put it.

Thanks for the correction, I'll try to clean up the writing of the prologue and I found someone to mark the mistakes before I publish the chapters.

Thanks for the feedback. :)

 Thanks! No,  my first language is portuguese. :)

Thankssss <3333

glad you liked it!

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Glad you liked it! <33

🤗<3

Thanks ksksk <33

loved the comment skkskk

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Glad you liked it! sksk <3333

They're the supreme baby boys! 💜

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Thanks! kskskks

I'm glad you like it! :D

About the next update, i'm not very sure about a specific date. But I want to post it before june (let's see if my cram course will let me ksks).

Thanks!! ♥️♥️♥️

Thaaakssss!!! ♥️♥️♥️

Soon, let Levi get their time, they are still in shock ksksks

We all need a Matheus in our lifes ksksk

Dude sjdksdjsandj Thanks!<3<3

 It truly has Rapunzel vibes! kksksks

And  I'm glad you're liking it! ;D

Dude...You're crushes must be wild kskksks! (loved it ♡)

And sure! :)

I'm glad you liked it! ♡

I can't really say anything about it because... of spoilers👀👀👀👀 but Leon and Levi are comming soon don't worry :p

Thank you ! I'm glad you liked it <3333

"Mother Gothel" is totally the best adjective for her kkkk She's kinda of a bad person...

And for the Tumblr question, I haven't done but feel free to ask something if you want :) ❤

Hi! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!

Yes, this part of the prologue is very to the point. I didn't really stop to think about it, but I went to see the second part that I wrote, and it is more in paragraph format than the released part. I think it's because I had more things to write about, like character descriptions, enviorement and etc.  But I'll take a better look at it and try to improve it for the next update!

Thank you very much for your opinion! ♥️

Yes, I realized that error only when i went to bed  kkkk I changed the variable's name, because of the mc's pronouns, so Isma's part  wasn't working . I fix it now! Thanks

Thanks!! <333

I'm really glad you liked it!! Roxanne is totally a Gothel kk  I'm glad that the typos did not interfere with the reading , I'll take a look  at it again but if you see any typos you can totally tell me, It helps a lot. :)

And last but not less important...Levi might be bad...

 but not as bad as the fall they will have for you. ♥

(...I'll just leave now. I need to sleep <3)

Thanks for the feedback! I'll fix it, and I'm glad you  enjoyed it so far :)

I'm glad you liked it!! ♡♡♡

Ow! Thank you  ♡