Dec 13, 2025
The character progression is developing very slowly. He states he wants to make it a goal to have his qi as strong as it was his prior life - yet doesn't make it a focus. Even after he states that a fodder requires his full stength. The story started with him saving a patient, and even failed at saving a cancer patient - so you'll think him focusing on saving patients supernatually would be the plot. At this point, he's doing ventures like pizzamaking, working at his parents cafe, movie acting. At this point, his main goal of returning to his prior qi is going
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to come together in the late chapters - where I'm not going to see. The author made it a point that the military was going to make him more capable in martial arts against weapons - yet the only change was Gas immunity. Too much screentime in the military was him overpowering others and him gaining favor by saving others mishaps. Again, not using screentime to improve his capability against weapons is against MC's goal. This would add meaningful tension which is missing. The MC's best trait is seeking how to become more likable, and we see the changes in character progression. I'm guessing "co-exisistence" is the theme now - we're 63 chapters in and he's not in conflict to where he needs anyone. The art is good—especially when it shows how he looks when he uses his demon hallucinations.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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