5 star 1st person guy's POV writing but 3 star storyline. I didn't like the weak heroine (she had to try too hard) or the love story that was based so5 star 1st person guy's POV writing but 3 star storyline. I didn't like the weak heroine (she had to try too hard) or the love story that was based solely on sex IMO. It needed more emotional development between the h/h to hit a real chord. The hero was great though and the author did a fabulous job with his character. ...more