Honestly I DNF for the sole reason of formatting. The authoring breaks up too many sentences. L
“He looks expensive. Powerful. Untouchable. He looks exHonestly I DNF for the sole reason of formatting. The authoring breaks up too many sentences. L
“He looks expensive. Powerful. Untouchable. He looks exactly like what they’re paying for. Power, status, and the kind of allure you can’t fake. If that wasn’t enough, his hair is just the right amount of tousled. It’s that calculated I-just-woke-up-and-ran-a-hand-through-it kind of perfect that makes women drop their panties without even blinking. It’s ridiculous Not to mention, unfair. It’s entirely possible I’m staring a bit too hard. A gorgeous brunette steps into the frame beside him, and my stomach knots. Here we go.”
I don’t think this woman understand that paragraphs can exist and still work for the book to emphasize your point. It was every chapter and started to annoy me to the point I couldn’t enjoy it. ...more
The beginning of the book felt off to me. Like this was a first time writer so I checked to see if that was**spoiler alert** 2.5 stars rounded up to 3
The beginning of the book felt off to me. Like this was a first time writer so I checked to see if that was the case.
It wasn’t.
I felt going and I fell into it and I actually really starting to enjoy the book. It went up to a three star to me. Honestly it fell down because of Chloe. The whole other side of her actually pissed me off. I wish there was a different nickname that she could have given herself. DarkofChlo was just off. If someone knew that they could fired for doing something like being on a sex website, she should have been better about keeping it to herself. What kind of friend used a company computer to look at her friend’s sex page? That just didn’t feel right and it just seemed like they needed a conflict and the author took the easy way out. Will I read something by this author? Probably not but I did enjoy this enough.
I actually like Jack. I could have done without the brooding the whole book but honestly reading his chapters were my favorite. Over all the plot was good. The sex scenes were as well. There were some edits that needed to be made but nothing good another good edit wouldn’t fix.
I did received this book for a honest review from Netgalley...more