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Lord Foul's Bane (The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant, the Unbeliever, #1)
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Dec 22, 2021
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Read 2 times. Last read December 13, 2021 to December 29, 2021.
Secondary Character Shocker! 'Bait and Switch,' of the Main Character Revealed!: "When I signed up for the role of Lena in 'Lord Foul's Bane,' I had no idea that the role of Thomas Covenant was secretly being played by Jeffrey Epstein." - Lena - Journal of the Harvey Weinstein School of Publishing.
I find myself in the position of re-reading this book (and possibly the series) in an attempt to validate my own memory... a quixotic enterprise, but one I'm undertaking because I have a particular bee in my bonnet about understanding the success of these books.
Of course, reading this book makes me think deeply about rapists, psychopaths, aggressive narcissism, and the concepts of restitution, redemption and the comparison of deontological and consequentialist ethics.... neither yours' nor my typical entertainment.
When I first read these books I was fresh off a farm, a youngster for whom rape was an abstraction that I'd fortunately never come across. When Covenant raped Lena I was shocked, horrified and perplexed - like - WTF? But I was also a naïve nerd who continued reading because book, fantasy, epic, might be as good as LoTR... and I read the whole series.
So, why read this again? I'm giving this another go. I'm non-plussed that a character as thoroughly unlikeable as Thomas Covenant could capture people's imagination and sympathy and I'd like to understand why.
I have a hypothesis (in multiple parts)... which is unlikely to be popular, but here it is.
[PART 1: Situational Psychopathy]: Thomas Covenant 'the unbeliever,' is situationally positioned as a psychopath, a creature driven by aggressive narcissism whose 'disbelief,' of the Land and its inhabitants renders him into the grandiose position of 'the one real thing,' relative to everyone else in the Land.
This is precisely the pose of psychopaths everywhere who envision themselves the narcissistic center of their own universe surrounded by human 'nothings,' that only have value in terms of their utility to the psychopath.
Our culture has substantial psychopathic and narcissistic traits embedded within it, especially the closer you get to the top of society.
Thomas Covenant's disbelief in the Land invites us all to position ourselves in 'his position,' as 'the one real thing,' in a dream world without real repercussions and accountability, and then to sympathize with Covenant within that positioning.
HOOK #1: Invite the reader to sympathise with vicarious psychopathy by proxy.
[PART 2: Normalisation of Sexual Predation]: Throughout the first 20% of the book, Covenant obsessively sexualises every female he comes across with special attention given to anyone who is a teenager. I.e. positioned between a child and a woman.
Covenant is the Jeffrey Epstein of fantasy literature.
The character of Lena, 16 yo and a virgin, is precisely his obsessive sexual target. Lena saves his life, heals him, feeds him, shelters him, and offers him nothing but compassion and kindness and so - he hits her (violence) then rapes (aggravated rape) her because it satisfies his immediate personal needs to do so.
The absence of justice for Lena is a tacit endorsement of sexual violence. In our culture and society, especially amongst the ruling elements, sexual violence is an accepted part of life. I posit that part of this book's success comes from its tacit endorsement of one of the worst features of our culture and society.
The subtext of this story is that rape is ok, and that any evil act committed in an environment without accountability (in this case, a dream world) is allowed. The key message is that 'it is only the presence/absence of accountability that makes an act right or wrong.'
In other words, 'Anything you want to do and can get away with is good!'
HOOK #2: Invite the reader to normalise Sexual Predation.
[PART 3: Myth of Universal Redemption*]: The idea that any evil act can be redeemed by a sufficiently impactful good act. This is a comforting belief that many people like to believe in. One day, one special day, we'll all be redeemed from our sins.
However, I believe that redemption rests on a foundation of restitution, of making the subject of the original harm whole, as if the harm had never been inflicted. If restitution can not be made then redemption can not be achieved.
Thievery (you can return stolen goods) can be redeemed. Lying (you could tell the truth) can be redeemed. But, Rape, like Murder, can not be undone. A murdered victim cannot be restored to life and filled with health. A raped soul can not be un-raped.
Thomas Covenant has no path to redemption, but this story will tell you he does - which overlays his act of evil in raping Lena with a soothing (and justice denying) blanket of 'somehow it's all right...'
*This is a corollary of the Myth of the Moral Ledger ... next part.
HOOK #3: Invite the reader to validate the soothing myth of universal redemption for any evil.
[PART 4: Myth of the Moral Ledger]:
This is the dominant ethical idea informing our culture. It is often framed as underpinning actions that are 'for the greater good,' but always ends up as 'the end justifies the means.'
I.e. Any act no matter how evil can be morally balanced, and even overwhelmed, if it results in a greater good.**
If Thomas Covenant saves the Land from Lord Foul, how many times can he rape Lena before his rapes outweigh his heroic act of saving the Land? One, ten, a hundred ... a million?
But if rape can not be restituted, Covenant can never un-rape Lena, he can never make her whole. No action of his can ever be measured against his rape of Lena and found capable of restoring her.
One day, she may forgive Covenant, but that would be her heroism - not his.
**In our world, 'For the greater good,' exists within a justification framework that is often abused to enable/commit acts of evil for 'expected goods,' that are never realised. All we are left with are the acts of evil and no 'greater goods.' This is normal human society.
HOOK #4: Invite the reader to validate the idea that the end justifies the means.
[SUMMARY]: This book has two stories within it.
[1] The superficial story: We are invited to journey with a leper through a world that could be (and is implied to be) real, but which he believes is a figment of his imagination. In his journey, he commits an atrocious evil deed, and then proceeds to the seat of local power where he admits to the local rulers that they are a dream. They assume he is a saviour and proceed on that basis to the end of the book, where he does indeed bring about a victory for the people of the Land. In the process, he attempts redemption for his evil deed by sending intelligent horses to 'pay homage,' to the victim of his evil deed.
On this level, the story appears to be a redemption arc from disbelief to belief. On the very last page, Covenant finally cares about what happens in the Land.
[2] Then there's the deeper story: Covenant obsessively sexualises every teenaged girl he meets. He is summoned to the Land, and meets Lena (16yo, virgin). She treats him with complete kindness and compassion to which he responds with violent Rape. Covenant luxuriates in the aftermath of the Rape, until he is struck by a fear of retribution and flees. He meets Lena's mother who becomes (awkwardly) his guide. He is confronted by Lena's angry boyfriend and is saved by 'The Oath of Peace.' Covenant then forgets about the rape and engages in a false dilemma while he struggles to adjust to the reality of the 'Land.' Setting up for the final act, Covenant suddenly remembers the 'Rape of Lena,' at Manhome and feels bad about it (indicating engagement with the Land as real (there was much preceding internal monologue where Covenant vacillates b/w the Land is real/dream as both impossible - an irreconcilable false dilemma leading up to this...)). Covenant commands the 'free spirits,' of the terrified Ranyhyn, and sends them 'as a redemptive gesture,' to Lena.*** The human guardians of the Ranyhyn, the Ramen, who are normally violently opposed to any harm to the sacred horses they care about, respond to this display of force through terror by literally falling at the feet of Covenant and worshiping his dominance. (Stockholm Syndrome in full display). Primed by all this, Covenant embarks into the final act, and successfully prosecutes the Quest, as he now, finally at the very end, believes enough to try, and reaches for the 'Staff of Law,' in an attempt to help.
There are two ways to read this book, [1] as a epic fantasy about a rapist leper who overcomes his doubt to save a Land filled with magic, beauty and terror, or [2] as a story validating psychopathy, rape culture, violence against women, the love of abuse, that the end justifies the means, and that any evil can be redeemed by a suitable good.
***There is also something infinitely creepy about Covenant's gesture of sending a Ranyhyn horse to Lena on an annual basis. Imagine a rapist sending their victim a single red rose on an annual basis... Covenant's behaviour turns my stomach.
It was with relief that I finished this book.
Final P.s. So, why was this book successful? Its hooks reflect dominant features of our culture and hence worked.
Not Recommended: 1 'No Justice for Lena,' stars.
I find myself in the position of re-reading this book (and possibly the series) in an attempt to validate my own memory... a quixotic enterprise, but one I'm undertaking because I have a particular bee in my bonnet about understanding the success of these books.
Of course, reading this book makes me think deeply about rapists, psychopaths, aggressive narcissism, and the concepts of restitution, redemption and the comparison of deontological and consequentialist ethics.... neither yours' nor my typical entertainment.
When I first read these books I was fresh off a farm, a youngster for whom rape was an abstraction that I'd fortunately never come across. When Covenant raped Lena I was shocked, horrified and perplexed - like - WTF? But I was also a naïve nerd who continued reading because book, fantasy, epic, might be as good as LoTR... and I read the whole series.
So, why read this again? I'm giving this another go. I'm non-plussed that a character as thoroughly unlikeable as Thomas Covenant could capture people's imagination and sympathy and I'd like to understand why.
I have a hypothesis (in multiple parts)... which is unlikely to be popular, but here it is.
[PART 1: Situational Psychopathy]: Thomas Covenant 'the unbeliever,' is situationally positioned as a psychopath, a creature driven by aggressive narcissism whose 'disbelief,' of the Land and its inhabitants renders him into the grandiose position of 'the one real thing,' relative to everyone else in the Land.
This is precisely the pose of psychopaths everywhere who envision themselves the narcissistic center of their own universe surrounded by human 'nothings,' that only have value in terms of their utility to the psychopath.
Our culture has substantial psychopathic and narcissistic traits embedded within it, especially the closer you get to the top of society.
Thomas Covenant's disbelief in the Land invites us all to position ourselves in 'his position,' as 'the one real thing,' in a dream world without real repercussions and accountability, and then to sympathize with Covenant within that positioning.
HOOK #1: Invite the reader to sympathise with vicarious psychopathy by proxy.
[PART 2: Normalisation of Sexual Predation]: Throughout the first 20% of the book, Covenant obsessively sexualises every female he comes across with special attention given to anyone who is a teenager. I.e. positioned between a child and a woman.
Covenant is the Jeffrey Epstein of fantasy literature.
The character of Lena, 16 yo and a virgin, is precisely his obsessive sexual target. Lena saves his life, heals him, feeds him, shelters him, and offers him nothing but compassion and kindness and so - he hits her (violence) then rapes (aggravated rape) her because it satisfies his immediate personal needs to do so.
The absence of justice for Lena is a tacit endorsement of sexual violence. In our culture and society, especially amongst the ruling elements, sexual violence is an accepted part of life. I posit that part of this book's success comes from its tacit endorsement of one of the worst features of our culture and society.
The subtext of this story is that rape is ok, and that any evil act committed in an environment without accountability (in this case, a dream world) is allowed. The key message is that 'it is only the presence/absence of accountability that makes an act right or wrong.'
In other words, 'Anything you want to do and can get away with is good!'
HOOK #2: Invite the reader to normalise Sexual Predation.
[PART 3: Myth of Universal Redemption*]: The idea that any evil act can be redeemed by a sufficiently impactful good act. This is a comforting belief that many people like to believe in. One day, one special day, we'll all be redeemed from our sins.
However, I believe that redemption rests on a foundation of restitution, of making the subject of the original harm whole, as if the harm had never been inflicted. If restitution can not be made then redemption can not be achieved.
Thievery (you can return stolen goods) can be redeemed. Lying (you could tell the truth) can be redeemed. But, Rape, like Murder, can not be undone. A murdered victim cannot be restored to life and filled with health. A raped soul can not be un-raped.
Thomas Covenant has no path to redemption, but this story will tell you he does - which overlays his act of evil in raping Lena with a soothing (and justice denying) blanket of 'somehow it's all right...'
*This is a corollary of the Myth of the Moral Ledger ... next part.
HOOK #3: Invite the reader to validate the soothing myth of universal redemption for any evil.
[PART 4: Myth of the Moral Ledger]:
"Consequentialism is a class of normative, teleological ethical theories that holds that the consequences of one's conduct are the ultimate basis for judgment about the rightness or wrongness of that conduct." REF: Wiki: Consequentialism.
This is the dominant ethical idea informing our culture. It is often framed as underpinning actions that are 'for the greater good,' but always ends up as 'the end justifies the means.'
I.e. Any act no matter how evil can be morally balanced, and even overwhelmed, if it results in a greater good.**
If Thomas Covenant saves the Land from Lord Foul, how many times can he rape Lena before his rapes outweigh his heroic act of saving the Land? One, ten, a hundred ... a million?
But if rape can not be restituted, Covenant can never un-rape Lena, he can never make her whole. No action of his can ever be measured against his rape of Lena and found capable of restoring her.
One day, she may forgive Covenant, but that would be her heroism - not his.
**In our world, 'For the greater good,' exists within a justification framework that is often abused to enable/commit acts of evil for 'expected goods,' that are never realised. All we are left with are the acts of evil and no 'greater goods.' This is normal human society.
HOOK #4: Invite the reader to validate the idea that the end justifies the means.
[SUMMARY]: This book has two stories within it.
[1] The superficial story: We are invited to journey with a leper through a world that could be (and is implied to be) real, but which he believes is a figment of his imagination. In his journey, he commits an atrocious evil deed, and then proceeds to the seat of local power where he admits to the local rulers that they are a dream. They assume he is a saviour and proceed on that basis to the end of the book, where he does indeed bring about a victory for the people of the Land. In the process, he attempts redemption for his evil deed by sending intelligent horses to 'pay homage,' to the victim of his evil deed.
On this level, the story appears to be a redemption arc from disbelief to belief. On the very last page, Covenant finally cares about what happens in the Land.
[2] Then there's the deeper story: Covenant obsessively sexualises every teenaged girl he meets. He is summoned to the Land, and meets Lena (16yo, virgin). She treats him with complete kindness and compassion to which he responds with violent Rape. Covenant luxuriates in the aftermath of the Rape, until he is struck by a fear of retribution and flees. He meets Lena's mother who becomes (awkwardly) his guide. He is confronted by Lena's angry boyfriend and is saved by 'The Oath of Peace.' Covenant then forgets about the rape and engages in a false dilemma while he struggles to adjust to the reality of the 'Land.' Setting up for the final act, Covenant suddenly remembers the 'Rape of Lena,' at Manhome and feels bad about it (indicating engagement with the Land as real (there was much preceding internal monologue where Covenant vacillates b/w the Land is real/dream as both impossible - an irreconcilable false dilemma leading up to this...)). Covenant commands the 'free spirits,' of the terrified Ranyhyn, and sends them 'as a redemptive gesture,' to Lena.*** The human guardians of the Ranyhyn, the Ramen, who are normally violently opposed to any harm to the sacred horses they care about, respond to this display of force through terror by literally falling at the feet of Covenant and worshiping his dominance. (Stockholm Syndrome in full display). Primed by all this, Covenant embarks into the final act, and successfully prosecutes the Quest, as he now, finally at the very end, believes enough to try, and reaches for the 'Staff of Law,' in an attempt to help.
There are two ways to read this book, [1] as a epic fantasy about a rapist leper who overcomes his doubt to save a Land filled with magic, beauty and terror, or [2] as a story validating psychopathy, rape culture, violence against women, the love of abuse, that the end justifies the means, and that any evil can be redeemed by a suitable good.
***There is also something infinitely creepy about Covenant's gesture of sending a Ranyhyn horse to Lena on an annual basis. Imagine a rapist sending their victim a single red rose on an annual basis... Covenant's behaviour turns my stomach.
It was with relief that I finished this book.
Final P.s. So, why was this book successful? Its hooks reflect dominant features of our culture and hence worked.
Not Recommended: 1 'No Justice for Lena,' stars.
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Reading Progress
September 21, 2016
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April, 2019
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April, 2019
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April 22, 2019
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December 13, 2021
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December 13, 2021
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December 13, 2021
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1.0%
"I read this when I was innocent of the world. I read it now to refresh my memory."
December 13, 2021
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7.0%
"Ch 2. Covenant negotiates the space between his leprosy, and the rejection of his neighbours before meeting a mysterious beggar with a strange warning."
December 15, 2021
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20.0%
"Situational Psychopathy: The circumstance of relating to the world within a psychopathic framework. Having rejected the vivid, persistent and consistent reality of the Land, Covenant arrogates to himself the position of being the sole real thing - all else is nothing but a shallow illusion, unable to hold its own value and worth and only of interest in terms of it's ability to cause him pleasure or pain. Hence Lena."
December 15, 2021
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20.0%
"Bought this on Amazon Kindle on the 13th December for $12.99 AUD. Seems a bit steep."
December 22, 2021
– Shelved as:
egregiously-bad
December 22, 2021
– Shelved as:
mostly-garbage
December 22, 2021
– Shelved as:
re-read
December 22, 2021
– Shelved as:
the-one-star-dungeon
December 22, 2021
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21.0%
"After all that has happened, I can't believe that Covenant still clings to the idea that he is a leper 'in the Land.' I.e. He's constant obsessive self-checking. I suppose I'll have to call myself an 'unbeliever...'
Perhaps his clinging to his leper routines are the flip side of his forgetfulness of raping Lena - both serve to validate his psychopathic positioning as 'the one real thing,' in the Land."
Perhaps his clinging to his leper routines are the flip side of his forgetfulness of raping Lena - both serve to validate his psychopathic positioning as 'the one real thing,' in the Land."
December 23, 2021
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30.0%
"Up a tree - literally. Covenant finds himself welcomed by a good woodland people who do not know him."
December 23, 2021
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30.0%
"I'm drawing an early conclusion that Mr. Donaldson honestly aimed to write a story centralised on the virtue of overcoming doubt to achieve a greater good.
I'm curious to see if that conclusion holds up over the course of the series.
As to whether that central theme is the primary theme of the story or if it is subverted by something much darker is a question that remains to be answered."
I'm curious to see if that conclusion holds up over the course of the series.
As to whether that central theme is the primary theme of the story or if it is subverted by something much darker is a question that remains to be answered."
December 25, 2021
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40.0%
"Foamfollower and diamondraught ... the Ents have arrived. However, Covenant remains unchanged, and Lena is long forgotten."
December 25, 2021
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40.0%
"After crossing much of Middle-Earth the Land, Covenant has finally arrived at Gondor Lord's Keep."
December 25, 2021
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45.0%
"Lord's keep at 45%...
Still wondering what the narrative point of Lena, her rape and the first 20% of the story is all about. If that was the set up - where's the pay off???"
Still wondering what the narrative point of Lena, her rape and the first 20% of the story is all about. If that was the set up - where's the pay off???"
December 26, 2021
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55.0%
"Reveal the one ring. In an awkward moment, Covenant finally admits to the high council that he thinks they are all a dream.... They took it quite well I thought."
December 26, 2021
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December 26, 2021
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December 27, 2021
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58.0%
"Covenant begins a process of self-reflection and honest appraisal - key steps toward self-awareness and progress away from his psychopathic positioning vs the Land and its people. However, this 'progress toward redemption,' is poisoned before it begins.
Without the rape - this could be a 4 star book."
Without the rape - this could be a 4 star book."
December 27, 2021
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66.0%
"The quest is in an urgent hurry against a foe who grows stronger every day and comes upon a tragic battlefield.
So, they stop and spend a whole day burying the dead...???"
So, they stop and spend a whole day burying the dead...???"
December 28, 2021
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86.0%
"If we posit that all the action is occurring within a 'dream,' experienced by the narrator - why on Earth should we 'the reader,' care.
The trope of 'All Just a Dream.' is a piece of crap trope that blows the reader 'care factor.' Hence the author must expect the reader to believe 'The Land,' is real, even though Covenant doesn't.
Hence Covenant's true journey must be from disbelief in the Land to belief."
The trope of 'All Just a Dream.' is a piece of crap trope that blows the reader 'care factor.' Hence the author must expect the reader to believe 'The Land,' is real, even though Covenant doesn't.
Hence Covenant's true journey must be from disbelief in the Land to belief."
December 29, 2021
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90.0%
"Now in the final battle. This is hilarious for all the wrong reasons. It's hard to believe that people really enjoyed this. The writing borders on incoherent. The battles certainly are incoherent, I'm noticing that haphazard 'this happens, that happens, etc,' is a signature move for the Author who has no idea whatsoever about writing a good action scene."
December 29, 2021
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Finished Reading
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Let me tell you a little story.
There's a powerful and wealthy family in the city in which I live, where the husband seduced his 15 year old niece and was discovered having sex with her. At 15, this is statutory rape and punishable with a jail term. His wife divorced him over the 'affair,' and in the process of getting a huge pay out, she signed an NDA to keep the affair secret so that her now ex husband could remain unpunished, the family name could remain unstained by such a crime, and she could get a fat wad of cash and continue to trade on the family name.
This is exactly the context within which powerful men rape girl-women and get away with it. Anyone harmed by the rape is simply paid off, silence is maintained, and the rapist goes unpunished. There is zero accountability and zero justice for the wealthy and powerful.
This is our world.
Covenant reflects this world perfectly. He rapes Lena with impunity, is never punished, is lauded by all he meets as the all-powerful saviour of the world. He barely thinks of Lena, and 'by his own account,' completely forgets about her until the moment at Manhome where he briefly remembers and 'feels bad,' about it. To assuage his own feelings, he sends a Ranyhyn horse to pay homage to her on a perpetual annual basis.
The local Ramen who reverence the horses, rather than being horrified by his act of commanding these naturally free spirits, bow at his feet in supplication to his majesty...
Zero accountability, zero justice, allied with a grandiose worship of the rapist.
The implicit message is that 'everything is allowed,' - if you can get away with it - which is psychopathy 101.
Jeffrey Epstein and Ghislaine Maxwell's under-age sex ring for the powerful was a feature of our culture, not a bug - and without doubt the tip of the iceberg. Covenant as a character lives the endorsement of Epstein/Maxwell's provision of rape subjects (via grooming) to our society's rich and powerful, because Covenant, by example, lives the creed that you can rape with impunity.
In essence - this book is a litmus test on people's attitude to rape, and its success is a reflection of the permissibility of rape in our culture. Don't believe me, look up https: // www. fantasybookreview. co. uk / Stephen-Donaldson / Lord-Fouls-Bane.html and search for the words 'Lena,' and 'Rape,' amongst the wholly positive reviews. You won't find them. Covenant's crime is erased. Lena and her suffering is erased. It's like everyone signed an NDA. Covenant will not be held accountable for his actions - ever.
Rape is so permissible in our society - it's very existence is erased.
Guess that explains my views on The Gap Into Conflict: The Real Story... You take out the rape scenes, and you have the opening sentence left.
Donaldson and I don't have the best relationship... :)
Guess that explains my views on The Gap Into Conflict: The Real Story... You take out the rape scenes, and you have the opening sentence left.
Donal..."
Interesting Sammy, I didn't know Donaldson had a pattern in this area.
P.S. Since I've now seen the ending, I've downrated this to (sans rape) to 3 stars based on the horribly clumsy handling of the final battle and associated events in the last 15% of the book.
I agree, Joe. I used to DM a lot of D&D games from age 17 to 27, and I never had anyone play an evil character. I would have found a request to do so very creepy.
Mostly because the story of it as an actual place is so BORING and uninteresting by comparison to this being all Thomas' insane delusion. I think of it as basically a Proto-Silent Hill with Lena playing the role of Maria and Thomas Covenant as James. Lord Foul is Pyramid Head.
(Snort! 😉 ) That is a possible reading, but I think the idea that the Land is real is actually supported by the surface narrative arc of Covenant's teetering on the dilemma of real/not-real and then stepping into acceptance of the Land as real to the point where he attempts to save it (reaching for the Staff of Law) and summoning the fire lions.
That only makes sense to me if the Land is real.
Stories that end with 'Oh, it was all only a dream,' are notoriously unsatisfying, and I strongly suspect that Donaldson is positioning the Land as real, and Covenant's disbelief of it as a mistake that he has to overcome.
I.e. Covenant's narrative arc is from disbelief to belief in a real thing that he is heavily disposed not to believe in - this is the key theme of the story.
His arc is essentially a redemptive one. Of course, I posit that such an arc is rendered impossible due the irredeemable rape of Lena. Hence I think the Donaldson has subverted his surface arc of redemption by making his character irredeemable.
That said, I suspect Donaldson wasn't thinking that when he wrote the book. I suspect that Donaldson saw the rape as helping to more clearly define the starting (low) point of Covenant's redemption as well as providing fuel for Covenant's later shift to the Land as real.
In conclusion, I think Covenant's redemptive arc is a failure due to authorial error. But that's just my opinion.
Indeed, Name Redacted. I've read the 2nd series in my youth and I expect to cover it again in this exercise.
Yes, the Land is real.
Well it's in their heads. :) But yes, author intent or not, the story is the lesser for it because the heart of the story should be Thomas coming to terms with the fact he wants to live and his self-hatred and loathing over his disease is not right. The Land is just a reflection of his hatred spoiling everything good in him.
His arc is essentially a redemptive one. Of course, I posit that such an arc is rendered impossible due the irredeemable rape of Lena. Hence I think the Donaldson has subverted his surface arc of redemption by making his character irredeemable.
That's largely up to the reader and pretty much where Donaldson made the correct choice. If Thomas Covenant had just burned down a bunch of villages or destroyed Alderaan, no one would have given a crap and accepted his redemption. The rape as the utterly awful and evil thing is the sole reason this book is still talked about decades later because it is something readers will not forgive and Thomas never can be forgiven for.
So I think that's not a mistake but actually what Donaldson intended. Thomas is someone who the reader loathes as much as Thomas himself does--and yet he's the only one who can fix things. Probably why there's no happy ending.
Indeed, C.T.
Review: This is quite an interesting essay, and he has some interesting ideas (which I'm not sure I agree with, they need some thinking ...) on the nature of fantasy, horror and epic fantasy in particular. However, while he talks about the character of Covenant, he never mentions Lena or her rape...
I suppose Lena remains invisible.
Thanks, Alia. I do have a bee in my bonnet about this series.
I read the first series way back, could never get into the second. I don't really agree with your hooks, because they all pre-suppose that Thomas Covenant, as the main character needs the reader to agree with, or emphasise with him. Let alone agree with what he does and says! I disagree, I think Covenant works (on whatever level he DOES work) because he is a focus for the story to act around, rather than a character for the reader to emphasis with.
I never liked Covenant, I have met a couple of people who read the books and liked him, it always mystified me (like people who love all of the Wheel of Time series). He had no redeeming features that I could see, his eternal levels of disbelief in the Land made him sound dumb, because whether it is really real or not, enjoy it for goodness sake. His eternal repeating the “ I'm a leper” mantra just made me impatient, because, very clearly, in the land he was not one.
I did enjoy the books, at the time, but I do not agree with your hooks. The numbers of epic fantasy quest books today are myriad, back then it was not so. Thus, however unlikable Convenant is, and however ill conceived his quest is (not the actual quest of saving the land, rather, the authors quest of following Convenant around while he whines over nothing) the world building is great and it was rare for it's time.
I think that Covenant is convincing as a Psychopath – especially so since he repeatedly and volubly claims he is the only thing that is real. Not sure about him being a Narcissist; as I understand it, they often have a really good grip on reality and how they and their victims relate. Covenant has less self awareness than an earthworm. Since I at NO point liked or sympathised with Covenant, Hook #1 does not apply. Epstein is fashionable at the moment, but he was an icon of money and social power, Covenant was not. If you are going to compare him to a child rapist then I think Mohammad is a more valid comparison as his allure was spiritual rather than wealth and also his society and child victims supported him.
Actually if you remove the theory that Covenant is meant to be a sympathetic character or that the reader is meant to emphasise with him, most of what you call hooks don't apply. Unlikable main characters are not uncommon in literature, they can often tell a story that a likeable character cannot. And with the rape theme, Humbert Humbert in Lolita springs instantly to mind.
Anyhow, I have run out of time here – but kudos to you for successfully re-reading this one. I have tried a couple of times and I just can't do it. The chronicles were pretty epic for their time, but have dated really badly and I just cannot re-read them.
I read the first series way back, could never get into the second. I don't really agree with your hooks, because they all pre-suppose that Thomas Covenant, as ..."
Awesome comment, Deborah. Much to think about. I'll definently have to deal with Covenant as a deliberately unlikeable protagonist.
Cheers Graeme
I read the first series way back, could never get into the second. I don't really agree with your hooks, because they all pre-suppose that Thom..."
Weeell, now I come to think of it, I am not so sure I would go so far as to say it was intentional on the part of the author. I don't know much about Donaldson but some aspects of the world building suggest he was a... complex person. But whether he intended it or not, we are at liberty to read the character as we choose.
As I have said, Covenant to my mind is NEVER in any way a 'good' character, for all the acts and behaviours that you itemise and I am not sure that his acts can be normalised.
By the way, I forgot to say earlier, I really enjoyed your review and the amount of thought that went into it.
Question; while we can agree that Covenant is not a sane or sympathetic character, what did you think about the rest of the worldbuilding? The concepts of a creator that can't be involved in his creation? The prevalent critic of the time that this was a more 'adult' fantasy world?
One thing that always bothered me, the first time I read it, was how steeped in Christian mythos it was, Lord Foul as an incredibly obvious devil figure and the detached creator...
LoTR is clearly adult and will outlast this travesty of a fantasy series.
I've been reflecting upon the whole encounter of Covenant with the Ranyhyn and Ramen where he commands the clearly terrified horses to do his bidding and the Ramen fall at his feet and worship him...
Imagine this, your nine-year-old daughter is a living saint, and demonstrated as such. Not only would you sacrifice your life for her as your child, you venerate her life as a religious sacrament that gives the totality of your life's purpose and meaning. Your very existence only has meaning through your care and preservation of her life.
(This is the relationship of the Ramen to the Ranyhyn).
A stranger appears at your door.
(Covenant arrives with the white gold ring on his finger).
He waves his forefinger back and forth, and your daughter, first clearly distressed, then crying and sobbing in abject terror dances from one foot to the other - clearly coerced against her will to obey.
You,
(A) Tear the stranger limb from limb for violating the (saintly child, Ranyhyn) which you hold in sacred trust, for which you would gladly give your life to protect, OR
(B) Fall at the stranger's feet and worship them for displaying power through terror.
Of course, (B) was chosen.
And this is 'The Mirror,' - as a society, we prostrate ourselves to the operation of power through terror (just like the Ramen) and then celebrate it as right and good!
The thing is ... the general endorsement of this book is precisely an endorsement of 'The Mirror,' that it holds up to the reader. A mirror that holds permission to rape with impunity, to wield dominion through terror, amongst other ills, and all of it is deemed good and right...
Ask yourself this - why was this message devoured by society, and what does that say about us all.
Frankly, if your eating shit - it's best to stop.
Why was this message devoured by (some aspects of) society? In addition to the points I already made, I think many books are heralded as the "New! Amazing! Best thing ever!" but fade from society promptly after. Usually they did something that was a little bit new and caught societies attention - briefly.
Second hand shops and book fairs overflow with the over prints. The Donaldson books are there in force, right next to ''Eat Pray Love" and "Fifty shades of Grey".
And it would have been a far better story, more like 3 stars.
The author could easily have mediated Covenant's shift from disbelief to belief as a series of small steps and achieved the same end result without providing a subtext of endorsing rape and rape culture.
This is why this story ends up in the 'egregiously bad,' shelf. The rape of Lena adds no value to the narrative, and literally evaporates value in the story. The rape itself is an egregious act. Relying on Covenant to remember it, as a spur to his final belief in the world is also egregiously unnecessary. Just an appallingly bad authorial choice.
So, why (sans rape) three stars instead of five.
[1] The author's writing heavily filters the characters experiences, we are nearly always 'told,' rather than 'shown,' the story, and the actual language itself... some of the sentences are just bizarre, such as...
[2] The battles are filled with nonsensical incoherent actions. Donaldson provides textbook examples of how not to write action scenes. In fact, his action scenes were the most entertaining part of the book - for all the wrong reasons. The sight of a whole wedge of ur-viles running over a cliff edge 'cause Covenant got dragged out of the way by one of the Bloodguard was particularly laughable.
[3] The villains are wholly stupid and two dimensional, and anyone who knows me, knows that I love a 'good,' nuanced villain who plays to the best of their ability. Drool Rockworm was simply a cipher for Lord Foul's machinations - none of which made any sense in this book.
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[4] Covenant assumes with the force of a cherished religious belief that engagement with the vivid reality of the land will not only send him mad, but will ensure that he is unable to tend to his body in his original 'real,' world.
But as long as he can remember where he came from, he doesn't lose the link, and if he can't escape his 'dream,' then whatever is happening to his body is happening without his input.
He could easily and safely engage with the Land, while looking for a way to return to his world.
This book requires the reader to buy into Covenant's false dilemma to care about the story.
I remain non-plussed why anyone imagines that this is good and effective story-telling.