Janet (iamltr)'s Reviews > Holograms in the Snow

Omg..

Ok, so. Spoilers abound, but its needed.

I gave two stars based on the fact that the actual storyline wasn't bad. The writing, however, was. It really needs editing. Commas show up where they shouldn't and then are not around when they are needed. This book also does not have chapters. There are pages where its only a couple of sentences.

I think they were trying to do a futuristic AU where men have female names and women have male names but I did not see any actual trans representation, though I may have missed it as this was like one long stream of consciousness that was typed out while kind of drunk.

I did not understand why Jennifer had his head cut off when he was killed and then it was stuck on a stick.

I kind of hope this gets edited so that we can see what it was that the writer was trying to show us.