Taylor Loewe's Reviews > Chasing Fate

Rushed story

Spice: 2/5

This story had so much potential. So much potential. Completely wasted on a novella. This should have been a good 400+ pages, but it was completely rushed to fit into a tiny novella spanning one like 2 days. It’s so obvious this is one of the first books the author wrote. Not to sound cruel, but it’s a try hard book. There at one point is like 2 pages wasted to explain her walking into a store where she got an iffy feeling. It’s overly written as though the author is just like how can I write the sky is blue into a full paragraph. I so wanted this story to be so much more. The MC knows her mom just died and she’s like immediately fine? She finds out she’s the key to saving 3 worlds and she just is like hm okay cool? She gets all these new powers and she just knows how to use them with like no training? I would DNF this book if it wasn’t so short. I pushed through and then I’m hit with an ending like that? What. The. Actual. **** just happened.