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The Best Kind of Forever (Riverside Reapers, #1)
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2 stars.
this was so disappointing. i had the literal highest hopes for this ever. i cant even say the writing was mediocre because what was that pacing. like seriously what was that pacing. they went on one date and theyre in love??? do they even know each other???? everything moved so fast and wasnt well developed. he shouldve grovelled more and she shouldve made him grovel more. AND WHATS WITH THE PLOT HOLE WE STILL DONT SEE HER FATHER GET RETRIBUTION.
also the ending sucked. it was decent enough for butterflies to flutter a little bit but some of those lines are the most delulu line one could come up with.
essentially, i cant believe this is a published novel. it is peak wattpad fanfiction material and dont get me wrong cause the rating would be very much different if i were rating this as a wattpad novel. wattpad novel wise maybe 3.6 stars (the pacing is such a turn off).
this was so disappointing. i had the literal highest hopes for this ever. i cant even say the writing was mediocre because what was that pacing. like seriously what was that pacing. they went on one date and theyre in love??? do they even know each other???? everything moved so fast and wasnt well developed. he shouldve grovelled more and she shouldve made him grovel more. AND WHATS WITH THE PLOT HOLE WE STILL DONT SEE HER FATHER GET RETRIBUTION.
also the ending sucked. it was decent enough for butterflies to flutter a little bit but some of those lines are the most delulu line one could come up with.
essentially, i cant believe this is a published novel. it is peak wattpad fanfiction material and dont get me wrong cause the rating would be very much different if i were rating this as a wattpad novel. wattpad novel wise maybe 3.6 stars (the pacing is such a turn off).
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Reading Progress
July 17, 2023
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July 17, 2023
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August 3, 2023
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August 3, 2023
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7.0%
""if your next talk consists of you convincing me to be a dad, i'll punch you in the taint"
HAHAHAHHAHA"
HAHAHAHHAHA"
August 3, 2023
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41.0%
"yea no this pacing is terrible. the saving grace of this book is im waiting for the grovelling"
August 3, 2023
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93.0%
""loving you was the easiest thing i've ever done"
im sorry but thats the most delulu thing ive ever heard."
im sorry but thats the most delulu thing ive ever heard."
August 3, 2023
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Finished Reading
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