Jai M {Cat Crazy Dragon }'s Reviews > Stone Will: Obsidian Angels MC

Epic Genre Fail. DNF 88%

I started this series [all diff authors], because of the PNR MC plots, not the RH, but I’d hoped that would be a fun addition [only one I’ve partially enjoyed was B2 so far].

Hard noPe on all accounts with this one.

The FMC has a clear hierarchy of favourites from most to least.
Unless the MMC’s are total submissive’s, this won’t work.
As an additional personal issue, it was all sex, and no relationship development, no steam, no romance.

As for the MC: the president [FMC], failed to take care of the club, killed without justification, failed to protect the members, and behaved more like a villain that needed to be put down.
Add on the fact that she was running around doing work better delegated, instead of work that couldn’t be, and not only is she a dictator, but a lousy one of those as well.

Nearing the end, I just got frustrated and bored, couldn’t even be bother to skim the end, the FMC was just so unlikeable and the whole focus of the story, sooo..🤷‍♀️

The only reason this is getting 2 and not less, is for the technical competency of the writing. I’m sure there are readers who will enjoy this regardless of all the genre fails.
But personally, I found it to be nothing but messy sociopathic narcissism. I figure the only reason it’s a RH is so the FMC can have more chasing after her, telling her how perfect, badass, and desirable she supposedly is [despite making her least wait and wait to have sex even once, while she continues to f*ck her fav. Even her torture victim gives her a look of adoration right before she kills him 🥱🙄].