Eden's Reviews > Love on the Brain

Not my author

No one
Bee every five second

"Wow I'm so small and I faint often while he's so big and tall tehehehe"

"I'm the person you hate most in the world hehe haha" My smile dropped and I rolled my eyes not even 50% in. I've had enough.

Ok. So I'm starting off with the things I like to not look like I'm a hater (I'm a hater) or that I'm hate reading (A term I recently learned. Few hours ago actually.)

1. Twitter story line
2. Félicette
3. The humor sometimes, till Bee starts... Making her existence known.
4. Levi (when he's verbal!)

Now let's get on the stuff I hated aka the fun part haha

This follows the Spanish Love Deception's formula of stupidity in the sense that FMC thinks MMC hates her while we see none of that. None that would call for how many times she repeats it at the very least.

This book could use some editing. Probably could be cut in half, if the "hate" and size difference are mentioned in passing, as they should, and not after every other breath by the FMC. Oh my fvcking god.
And you know for a rom-com? Revolving around STEM, the chemistry between Bee and Levi wasn't all that.

I knew I wasn't in for earth shattering, groundbreaking literature, but Jesus Christ. For someone who recycles the same book over and over you'd think she at least gets better at that. Admittedly, I haven't read the other books, with that being said there's no way they're worse. I refuse to believe it.

Between this and Spanish Love Deception by another author I've read enough books about FMCs who are too stuck in their heads, forcefully trying to shove their enemies to lovers delulus down my throat and Non-verbal MMCs sent from non communicative hell for a decade at least.

So yeah here's a ⭐