Janet (iamltr)'s Reviews > Perfect Prey

Ok look, I picked this up on a whim. The blurb said it was gonna be a harem romance and we all know I cannot resist that many m's.

Firstly, this is a new to me writer and I loved the writing style. It was great and each mc was different.

Secondly, I loved Kit, James, Bishop, and Darius. They made getting to the end of this extremely long story worth it. I didn't like Holden at all. Not even by the end.

Thirdly, this was an actual dark romance.

Fourthly, I liked that Bishop ending.

Now onto my only complaint for this one.

This was too long. I know this was a kindle vella story first and you can actually see that in the writing and weird editing of the chapters, but it needed to be cut down a lot.

I kind of lost steam for the story near the middle, but finished just because I needed to know how this one ended.