Rachel Webb's Reviews > His to Possess

Personally not my cup of tea. I requested this title because the description sounded like something I would like, but by the time I got to the last couple sections I felt like I was reading something I didn't sign up for. That being said, I know there are patrons out there who read these types of books, but personally (view spoiler)[brothers sharing a woman, even if it's just one time, is not for me. I found it uncomfortable to read and found that I skimmed through the whole last scene. Not to mention she slept with both of them on separate occasions. Realistically, how do family holidays and day to day meetings work out?? Do they just continue to share her or Rafe just pushes back his supposed feelings of real love for her? To me, there are just too many things to work out and like I said, the description needs to be modified to reflect what the reader will be getting into. I don't think it needs to be revealed that Rafe is Storm, although that was pretty easy to figure out before the big reveal, but somewhere it needs to be mentioned that a m/m/f situation occurs. (hide spoiler)]

I didn't find the writing to be bad, in fact I liked the way things were handled with not too much emphasis on certain things that would have dragged the main story down and the different points of view we received. In most serials I find that first person point of view gets tedious and I'm always wondering what the other person in the relationship is thinking. In this aspect, the author handled it very well and each person was distinguishable from the next. The scenes between Jess and Dane were very well written and extremely sizzling. (view spoiler)[However, when we got to the love scene between her and Rafe, I personally felt like she was betraying Dane even though he told her it was just physical. If she was so in love with Dane, why go for Rafe? Sure she was previously in love with him, but he broke her heart and just seeing his tattoos wasn't enough of a reason to have sex with him. Perhaps that situation could be better handled, because it make me think Jess was led by her libido and not her brain or heart and made me not like her character. There's a way to write a character as sexually liberated, but when you involve feelings like the author did, you can't have it both ways and so Jess looked like a cheater who couldn't make a decision to save her life. (hide spoiler)]

I will possibly read more by this author if I know what I'm getting. Like I said, her writing style was fine, just the situations that occurred were not for me.