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White Teeth by Zadie Smith
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White Teeth is an expansive, detailed, and beautifully written attempt to encapsulate the social chaos that blossoms at the bridging of generational, national and sexual mindsets. It reminds me very much of the freeflowing histories written by Marquez and Allende, as well as Salman Rushdie's strange little one-off treatise on cultural alienation, Fury. (Samad, in particular, reminds me quite a bit of Fury's Malik Solanka.)

Smith does many things well. She has a serious ear for dialogue and accent, she knows how to manage the flow and pacing of a story, and she's quite skilled at employing large concepts (genetic manipulation, immigrant psychology, the concept of history itself) both as fact and as metaphor. Her cast of characters is varied and nearly every one of them comes off as a fully flesh and blood human being. However, it's in terms of these personalities that I feel she makes her biggest misstep.

Zadie Smith is what I'd call an Ironist. I don't mean this in the Mark Twain, Kurt Vonnegut, Jon Stewart sense. I don't mean that she's a comedian. I mean it in the sense that the territory she stands on--that her narrator in White Teeth stands on--is one whose boundaries are staked out in terms of what she is not. My friend Brandon commented below that Smith shows "blatant contempt for every character except the one who is clearly based on the author." While I understand where he's coming from, I don't think it's contempt per se. On the contrary, I think Smith has deep feelings for most of her characters--even the more despicable ones like Crispin and Millat. I think that what Brandon interprets as contempt is something far more ambiguous: let's call it detached superiority.

The Ironist defines herself through the process of over-defining others. Every character in this novel is over-defined, over-drawn. While this provides us with a great, at times excruciating level of detail, it also paints each of them into a kind of cage wherein all of their actions are predictable. Each of them has a sort of "final vocabulary" (cf. Rorty) that defines the limits of what they might do or say--the doctrines of Islam and the Watchtower Society, of PETA or clinical science. In the worst cases, their adherence to these vocabularies allows Smith to slip them into easy "types" (see: Mr. Topps, Crispin, Joshua, Marcus, the various members of FATE). Smith creates her authorial/narrative identity--what's called a metastable personality--by passively proving that she is not limited by such a final vocabulary, and that in escaping their confines she has a broader, more comprehensive view of the social workings of the world. This is, generally speaking, the goal of any omniscient narrator, but the way that Smith goes about writing this one in particular imparts a certain sense of smugness (the parenthetical asides to the reader, the knowing winks, the jokes at the expense of easy targets) that isn't always present.

The metastable personality is the natural reaction to uncomfortability with final vocabularies, but it itself is of course just as self-defining as any of them (albeit in the opposite direction). It instinctually yearns for instability, but prefers to admire chaos from afar rather than living in it. The metastable personality knows that in order to maintain coherence it must remain stable, and that the only way to remain stable is to balance itself on the disbelief of all known final vocabularies. Smith writes off worldview after worldview, but is of course unable to articulate her own because her own is simply the absence of adherence to any such worldview.

This isn't so much a criticism of Smith's work as it is an explanation of why it is the way it is, and why it can be read as contempt.
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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 25, 2016 12:43PM) (new)

Terrific comment! You changed my mind about this book. I had given it five stars, but I had missed the smugness. You're quite right. I made it four. I'm going to read all your reviews.


message 2: by Ben (last edited Aug 25, 2016 12:44PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Ben I'd hate to think I made you like a book less, but at the same time I'm glad you got something out of the review. :]

I do need to write more of them.


message 3: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 25, 2016 12:44PM) (new)

Great! I love the way you think. Mind you, I'm an English and drama professor. What would you expect? You do a great job of talking about literature.


message 4: by Ben (last edited Aug 25, 2016 12:44PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Ben Ah, and I'm a former English major. Your kind have trained me well. ;]


message 5: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 25, 2016 12:44PM) (new)

It makes me happy to see that our kind doesn't always waste its hot air.


message 6: by Paul (new) - rated it 1 star

Paul Bryant Great review and many thanks - I had just decided to give this one up and you provide a fulsome description of why I did. Which was not your intention, I understand.


Rebecca Yes! Thank you. You've managed to pin down something I was having trouble articulating.


Emily Bonazzola Hi,
So I haven't read this book in a while, and most of the people here haven't commented in a while either, but I do not follow some of the points being made here. If anyone would care to talk about it that'd be cool.

I thought it was a very funny book, and the author was very much saying things about her world view...but I'm not an English major, and I haven't studied all those terms and stuff.


Yana Great, great, great review! You really nailed it and articulated everything much more eloquently than I could. It was a pleasure reading this.


message 10: by W.D. (new) - rated it 4 stars

W.D. Clarke Wow, really well-written review. You're quite right about her imprisoning her characters in a "final vocabulary". I just took that as the usual youthful all-knowingness, but I think she also managed, in her limited omiscient Jamesian style, to empathise with most of them as well, the effect of which for me was that each ended up imprisoned in their own solipsistic silo, which I took to be one of Smith's aims in the book. I never did quite get around the purpose of her narrator, though, but you've crystallized that for me!


Edwin Blair Superb grasp on this excellent piece of literature that so many had a hard time understanding. I almost entirely agree with your review and can see why and where 'Brandon's' perception and interpretation of some characters arise from. I believe she is more like Charles Dickens in her approach to prose and character creation; Just like Dickens her characters are memorable, slightly exaggerated (in creation, see The Beadle and the Artful dodger lol) and each has a duty to represent the chaotic social constructs she wishes to address. Neither one is evil or all the way benevolent, just simply a product of these social constructs such as race, religion, physical looks, generational disparities on so forth. Zadie Smith has a preternatural ability to understand and decipher human nature and psyche, with a gift to express it in stylish, witty, dark humorous prose which offers delightful and refreshing insight. For a first novel, I will concede that it was an ambitious undertaking on her behalf, with some "rookie flaws", but minimal ones nonetheless, that we can forgive her for. Cheers, I look forward to more of your reviews sir!


message 12: by Ben (new) - rated it 3 stars

Ben Thanks, Edwin. I've been incredibly lazy about writing them, unfortunately!


message 13: by Edwin (last edited May 17, 2017 03:48AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Edwin Blair Ben wrote: "Thanks, Edwin. I've been incredibly lazy about writing them, unfortunately!"

Come, Come Ben ENERGY! Lol. They don't need to be lengthy, an effective summation would suffice, I think at least. You are of the quality reviewer ( of a very small selection I will bluntly opine) that I count on to help select my next read but also contrast/compare if we extracted the same or similar themes, motifs, tone etc. I will be awaiting when you decide to 'lace them back up' and make your comeback, Lol!


message 14: by Elizabeth (new) - added it

Elizabeth yes, write more reviews!


message 15: by Suraj (last edited Aug 06, 2017 12:00AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Suraj Alva From whence has come this idea that the writer is not a human being; someone like all of us: flaws, biases and all. No god deigns to write for us, petty and frivolous transients that we are. A human's handiwork is all we can bank on, to understand our condition.


message 16: by Zoe (new) - rated it 2 stars

Zoe Waites My exact feelings on the book


Alberto Godoy Eyzaguirre García Márquez, mind the father.


João Pedro I agree that one of the most important achievements in this novel is the usage of a perfectly constructed metaphor, within the characters and FutureMouse, which provides the author’s insight on the contemporary times. The city and the suburban environment allows for Zadie Smith’s views on religion, immigration, social status, poverty and scientific developments to materialize in a tragic tense, sort of comic kind of way.
Also, the beginning of the novel might be one of the most brilliant achievements in modern literature, with its honest distinction between fate and self determination


Edwin Blair Excellent! To think she began work on this 480 paged book (her Debut at that) at 20, published by 24 and a BBC, TV adaptation deal for the rights to it as a mini-series by 26. Zadie's writing is attractive not just because of her stylistic delivery or her surgical wit and humor. Smith's upbring in NW London ( not the safest or pleasent) streets lends her instant credibility when writing about inner city, urban life. Her bi-racial origins gives her a unique advantage and keen observatory powers on which to draw deeply insightful knowledge about social status, racial relations, generational angst, similarities and differences. Born into the "hip-hop era" and as its influence spread and caught fire Zadie Smith peppers her writing with occasional vernacular slang words effortlessly, because it's a world she has and can easily traverse to back and forth, just as gracefully as she can in sophisticated circles. This 'asset' is what drew, and draws the legion of younger readers to her like at magnet and the quality of her content with its fresh take on its delivery style are what keeps those readers around.


João Pedro Edwin, I completely agree with your way of thinking. It is all about Zadie’s inside knowledge from a young age, which allowed her to start the novel so early. Not everyone of us are able to do that at 20, because we haven’t actually lived enough stories within our own lives and environment. Therefore, there is a search for them in literature by authors as Zadie Smith.


Edwin Blair João wrote: "Edwin, I completely agree with your way of thinking. It is all about Zadie’s inside knowledge from a young age, which allowed her to start the novel so early. Not everyone of us are able to do that..." Thank you, João! Some usually unexamined angles/perspective are lenses we must learn to look at new and even older works of literature. Professional literary critics approach their reviews far too academically, not very accessible to 90% of the readers and slightly biased. There's nothing better than the fresh eyes of the 'Layman', unspoiled by any biases, academic objectivity etc., who can articulate his/her review on and share it with us.


Laurel Starkey Thank you for your review. It articulates for me why this book provokes such a feeling of emotional dullness in me, despite the clever humor. It makes me feel that the world is a very grey, hopeless place. I’m struggling with wanting to finish the book because I too am feeling contempt for all the characters except for Irie Jones. She is the bright spot but even her light is very dim.

The style of prose and theme reminded me of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy: the world is absurd and it swallows us all eventually.


message 23: by Jane (new)

Jane I also thank you for your review.. . . I’m partway through listening to White Teeth and discovered something is isn’t quite working for me. So I decided to check out some goodreads reviews to see if anyone else was having the same trouble. You put into words what I couldn’t and, in a sense, are giving me permission to return this book unfinished.

I also agree with João’s take on things. Especially her comment about most of us not having “lived enough stories within our own lives and environments” at such a young age. This, I believe, is one of Zadie Smith’s greatest accomplishments in writing White Teeth.


message 24: by Ian (new) - rated it 4 stars

Ian Lumsden I agree with the first commenter, you changed my mind about this book, but in my case you've only helped me gain a deeper appreciation for this novel.


Fareedah Agberemi Yes. I am glad someone saw this and could put it into words.


message 26: by Ziba (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ziba I don't quite agree with this review, because I thought the point of some of the characters you call "despicable" are that their vices don't define them, because most of them were actually quite like-able.


message 27: by Indran (new) - added it

Indran Interesting, never heard the term "metastable" personality before. It sounds like this book then does the opposite extreme of Adam Levin's The Instructions, where every character sounds identical


message 28: by Chad (new)

Chad Connally she was also 25 when it was published and even younger when it was written. As an “OG” in my 40s, i read her tone and style and narrative omniscience more as precocity than in psychological terms


message 29: by Chad (new)

Chad Connally also, it’s worth noting that Smith ever write anything in the first person until Swing Time. She has said she never felt authoriallg grounded (or something similar to that. Can’t remember her exact words) enough to tackle a first person narration until swing time


message 30: by Sara (new) - rated it 5 stars

Sara Budarz That’s odd. I had the opposite reaction: I thought she was so kind towards her characters, especially someone like Millat who could have easily been written off as a trouble-maker and instead is given such honest depth.


message 31: by Manjul (new)

Manjul Bajaj You pinpoint the problem with this book so eloquently. It also helped me understand why I disliked Kiran Desai's The Inheritance of Loss.


message 32: by Norma Michael (new)

Norma Michael Bobbi


message 33: by Zack (new)

Zack Oliver Wow this is the kind of comment I'd love to see more of!

I only have a couple criticisms of your comment, and they have to do with clarity. The first is that some of your technical vocabulary was left undefined. Two examples that stick out to me are "final vocabulary" and "metastable personality". These terms are too technical for a general, or even an educated audience. And while you do define "metastable personality", the definition is hampered by its dependence on "final vocabularies".

This section of your comment brings up my second criticism, which is one of sentence structure. You introduce metastable personalities in a way that jars, and the general reader will feel more comfortable even just by your reordering that sentence's content. Readers appreciate when sentences are organized such that information the reader is likely to understand is placed at the beginning of the sentence and new or harder to understand information (especially of a technical nature) is placed near the end.

Anyway, I hope it doesn't seem that I didn't appreciate your comment. I just want a clearer understanding of what you mean.
I was also an English major, but I'm guessing you went to grad school. What you mention is stuff that I think about when reading but don't have the vocabulary to say. And it disappoints me quite a bit to feel that I was banging my head on the walls of undergrad when all the fun I wished for was being had in grad school.


message 34: by Zack (new)

Zack Oliver I'm slightly embarrassed because I missed where you had earlier introduced "metastable personality" . I also looked up Rorty's "final vocabulary", so now I finally have the clarity I sought. I'm glad I saw you comment. I, too, notice that final vocabulary thing in people, especially whenever a conversational topic unwittingly steps on their self esteem.


Berdine André Well phrased and captured!!!


Sandra An interesting, if somewhat absolutist, review. You place considerable faith in your ability to assess the author's world view from the novel...


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