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White Teeth
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White Teeth is an expansive, detailed, and beautifully written attempt to encapsulate the social chaos that blossoms at the bridging of generational, national and sexual mindsets. It reminds me very much of the freeflowing histories written by Marquez and Allende, as well as Salman Rushdie's strange little one-off treatise on cultural alienation, Fury. (Samad, in particular, reminds me quite a bit of Fury's Malik Solanka.)
Smith does many things well. She has a serious ear for dialogue and accent, she knows how to manage the flow and pacing of a story, and she's quite skilled at employing large concepts (genetic manipulation, immigrant psychology, the concept of history itself) both as fact and as metaphor. Her cast of characters is varied and nearly every one of them comes off as a fully flesh and blood human being. However, it's in terms of these personalities that I feel she makes her biggest misstep.
Zadie Smith is what I'd call an Ironist. I don't mean this in the Mark Twain, Kurt Vonnegut, Jon Stewart sense. I don't mean that she's a comedian. I mean it in the sense that the territory she stands on--that her narrator in White Teeth stands on--is one whose boundaries are staked out in terms of what she is not. My friend Brandon commented below that Smith shows "blatant contempt for every character except the one who is clearly based on the author." While I understand where he's coming from, I don't think it's contempt per se. On the contrary, I think Smith has deep feelings for most of her characters--even the more despicable ones like Crispin and Millat. I think that what Brandon interprets as contempt is something far more ambiguous: let's call it detached superiority.
The Ironist defines herself through the process of over-defining others. Every character in this novel is over-defined, over-drawn. While this provides us with a great, at times excruciating level of detail, it also paints each of them into a kind of cage wherein all of their actions are predictable. Each of them has a sort of "final vocabulary" (cf. Rorty) that defines the limits of what they might do or say--the doctrines of Islam and the Watchtower Society, of PETA or clinical science. In the worst cases, their adherence to these vocabularies allows Smith to slip them into easy "types" (see: Mr. Topps, Crispin, Joshua, Marcus, the various members of FATE). Smith creates her authorial/narrative identity--what's called a metastable personality--by passively proving that she is not limited by such a final vocabulary, and that in escaping their confines she has a broader, more comprehensive view of the social workings of the world. This is, generally speaking, the goal of any omniscient narrator, but the way that Smith goes about writing this one in particular imparts a certain sense of smugness (the parenthetical asides to the reader, the knowing winks, the jokes at the expense of easy targets) that isn't always present.
The metastable personality is the natural reaction to uncomfortability with final vocabularies, but it itself is of course just as self-defining as any of them (albeit in the opposite direction). It instinctually yearns for instability, but prefers to admire chaos from afar rather than living in it. The metastable personality knows that in order to maintain coherence it must remain stable, and that the only way to remain stable is to balance itself on the disbelief of all known final vocabularies. Smith writes off worldview after worldview, but is of course unable to articulate her own because her own is simply the absence of adherence to any such worldview.
This isn't so much a criticism of Smith's work as it is an explanation of why it is the way it is, and why it can be read as contempt.
Smith does many things well. She has a serious ear for dialogue and accent, she knows how to manage the flow and pacing of a story, and she's quite skilled at employing large concepts (genetic manipulation, immigrant psychology, the concept of history itself) both as fact and as metaphor. Her cast of characters is varied and nearly every one of them comes off as a fully flesh and blood human being. However, it's in terms of these personalities that I feel she makes her biggest misstep.
Zadie Smith is what I'd call an Ironist. I don't mean this in the Mark Twain, Kurt Vonnegut, Jon Stewart sense. I don't mean that she's a comedian. I mean it in the sense that the territory she stands on--that her narrator in White Teeth stands on--is one whose boundaries are staked out in terms of what she is not. My friend Brandon commented below that Smith shows "blatant contempt for every character except the one who is clearly based on the author." While I understand where he's coming from, I don't think it's contempt per se. On the contrary, I think Smith has deep feelings for most of her characters--even the more despicable ones like Crispin and Millat. I think that what Brandon interprets as contempt is something far more ambiguous: let's call it detached superiority.
The Ironist defines herself through the process of over-defining others. Every character in this novel is over-defined, over-drawn. While this provides us with a great, at times excruciating level of detail, it also paints each of them into a kind of cage wherein all of their actions are predictable. Each of them has a sort of "final vocabulary" (cf. Rorty) that defines the limits of what they might do or say--the doctrines of Islam and the Watchtower Society, of PETA or clinical science. In the worst cases, their adherence to these vocabularies allows Smith to slip them into easy "types" (see: Mr. Topps, Crispin, Joshua, Marcus, the various members of FATE). Smith creates her authorial/narrative identity--what's called a metastable personality--by passively proving that she is not limited by such a final vocabulary, and that in escaping their confines she has a broader, more comprehensive view of the social workings of the world. This is, generally speaking, the goal of any omniscient narrator, but the way that Smith goes about writing this one in particular imparts a certain sense of smugness (the parenthetical asides to the reader, the knowing winks, the jokes at the expense of easy targets) that isn't always present.
The metastable personality is the natural reaction to uncomfortability with final vocabularies, but it itself is of course just as self-defining as any of them (albeit in the opposite direction). It instinctually yearns for instability, but prefers to admire chaos from afar rather than living in it. The metastable personality knows that in order to maintain coherence it must remain stable, and that the only way to remain stable is to balance itself on the disbelief of all known final vocabularies. Smith writes off worldview after worldview, but is of course unable to articulate her own because her own is simply the absence of adherence to any such worldview.
This isn't so much a criticism of Smith's work as it is an explanation of why it is the way it is, and why it can be read as contempt.
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Sep 26, 2007 01:29PM
Terrific comment! You changed my mind about this book. I had given it five stars, but I had missed the smugness. You're quite right. I made it four. I'm going to read all your reviews.
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I do need to write more of them.
Great! I love the way you think. Mind you, I'm an English and drama professor. What would you expect? You do a great job of talking about literature.
It makes me happy to see that our kind doesn't always waste its hot air.
So I haven't read this book in a while, and most of the people here haven't commented in a while either, but I do not follow some of the points being made here. If anyone would care to talk about it that'd be cool.
I thought it was a very funny book, and the author was very much saying things about her world view...but I'm not an English major, and I haven't studied all those terms and stuff.
Come, Come Ben ENERGY! Lol. They don't need to be lengthy, an effective summation would suffice, I think at least. You are of the quality reviewer ( of a very small selection I will bluntly opine) that I count on to help select my next read but also contrast/compare if we extracted the same or similar themes, motifs, tone etc. I will be awaiting when you decide to 'lace them back up' and make your comeback, Lol!
Also, the beginning of the novel might be one of the most brilliant achievements in modern literature, with its honest distinction between fate and self determination
The style of prose and theme reminded me of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy: the world is absurd and it swallows us all eventually.
I also agree with João’s take on things. Especially her comment about most of us not having “lived enough stories within our own lives and environments” at such a young age. This, I believe, is one of Zadie Smith’s greatest accomplishments in writing White Teeth.
I only have a couple criticisms of your comment, and they have to do with clarity. The first is that some of your technical vocabulary was left undefined. Two examples that stick out to me are "final vocabulary" and "metastable personality". These terms are too technical for a general, or even an educated audience. And while you do define "metastable personality", the definition is hampered by its dependence on "final vocabularies".
This section of your comment brings up my second criticism, which is one of sentence structure. You introduce metastable personalities in a way that jars, and the general reader will feel more comfortable even just by your reordering that sentence's content. Readers appreciate when sentences are organized such that information the reader is likely to understand is placed at the beginning of the sentence and new or harder to understand information (especially of a technical nature) is placed near the end.
Anyway, I hope it doesn't seem that I didn't appreciate your comment. I just want a clearer understanding of what you mean.
I was also an English major, but I'm guessing you went to grad school. What you mention is stuff that I think about when reading but don't have the vocabulary to say. And it disappoints me quite a bit to feel that I was banging my head on the walls of undergrad when all the fun I wished for was being had in grad school.