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Spin Me Round Book 1 by Elle Carmichael
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I think due to the length of this story, it was hard to connect to the characters, not to mention it moves so quick it's hard to really get into any one scene.

Gar comes off as very immature with her drinking and disregard for her lover's mother, even if said mother doesn't like her and I can see why. Lena, her lover, is a doormat. She lets her mother and Gar control her. Wesley... well, I'm not sure how I feel about his forcefulness and high handedness.

I felt like there was more telling than showing with how the book was written. Things needed to be slowed down and give more finesse and feeling to really draw in the reader to what the characters are feeling/doing/experiencing.

However, I think there is a lot of potential in the story so I will keep reading with the hopes that it gets better as it goes.

I received a free copy of this book to read and review for Inked Reads.

Renee
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Reading Progress

Finished Reading
August 5, 2015 – Shelved
August 5, 2015 – Shelved as: erotica
August 5, 2015 – Shelved as: f-f
August 5, 2015 – Shelved as: bisexual

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