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Fight for You
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So this book is hard for me to write a review about. I liked it, and I didn’t like it at the same time; I’ll try to explain as best I can. I was intrigued by the concept and the plot. The plot moved quickly, which kept my interest. I was definitely wanting to find out what happened to these two women.
However, I didn’t find any real connection between them or to me. I can’t tell if it’s because it wasn’t there or if it was because of the writing. There was a lot of telling in this story, rather than showing and a few very odd and abrupt point of view shifts. Each woman seemed very similar to the other, so it was hard to tell who was thinking/feeling what.
That aside, the over all plot and story line was very interesting and unique. It was somewhat predictable and not at the same time. There wasn’t much lead in or foreshadowing to the unpredictable parts, and the beginning seemed more focused on the action and the end on the romance.
This could have definitely been a novel, and it might have served the plot better if it was. It would have allowed for expansion of the feelings and personalities that I felt were so lacking in the story itself. As a short story, it was complete with beginning, middle, and end.
**I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review from Inked Rainbow Reads**
~AJ
However, I didn’t find any real connection between them or to me. I can’t tell if it’s because it wasn’t there or if it was because of the writing. There was a lot of telling in this story, rather than showing and a few very odd and abrupt point of view shifts. Each woman seemed very similar to the other, so it was hard to tell who was thinking/feeling what.
That aside, the over all plot and story line was very interesting and unique. It was somewhat predictable and not at the same time. There wasn’t much lead in or foreshadowing to the unpredictable parts, and the beginning seemed more focused on the action and the end on the romance.
This could have definitely been a novel, and it might have served the plot better if it was. It would have allowed for expansion of the feelings and personalities that I felt were so lacking in the story itself. As a short story, it was complete with beginning, middle, and end.
**I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review from Inked Rainbow Reads**
~AJ
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