*J* Too Many Books Too Little Time's Reviews > Trust the Focus

I don't even know what to say here. But I didn't much care for this one. I'm going to chalk it up to the fact that either

(a) this was this author's first MM book? Because...hello Strong Signal and Fast Connection...LOVED those. And I even liked books 2 and 3 of this series.

or

(b) because I read books 2 and 3 first this one wasn't as good for me? Maybe had I read the series in the proper order I would have liked it more.

And I didn't hate it, it was okay. But there was some definite skimming going on.

My three main problems with the book....

(1) The dialogue:

CHEESY! Some of the stuff they said to each other. Just no.

(2) Justin:



His reactions several times throughout the book, made me rage-y. Especially because ten seconds later he realized what a dumb-ass he was being.

(3) The melodrama at the end:



Hate that plot device. That was so not necessary.

So yeah, this was a miss for me. Still...I'm a big fan of this author. I've liked all of her other books. And I'll continue to read the books in this series.