LESSON 17 – ESSAY DẠNG 1

40’ – 7 điểm – độ dài 250 – 300 từ.

Type 1: hỏi: pros and cons / advantages and
disadvantages/ benefits and drawbacks/ upside and
downside/ merit and demerit / positive and negative.
Đề thi: “chủ đề - đặt tình huống chủ đề”. Câu hỏi.
Write an essay to discuss the pros and cons of the Internet.
What are the negatives and positives of playing video games?
Write an essay to discuss the pros and cons of SHOPPING ONLINE.
Write an essay to discuss the pros and cons of STUDYING ABROAD.
EM HÃY VIẾT 1 BÀI LUẬN VỀ LỢI + BẤT LỢI CỦA INTERNET.
ESSAY => LUẬN : LÍ LẼ/ LUẬN ĐIỂM/ LUẬN CỨ / DẪN CHỨNG
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MỞ BÀI: 2 câu:
Lời dẫn :
In contemporary era = in contemporary society, : trong xã hội hiện đại
In light of technological advancements, : trong bối cảnh phát triển
manh về CN,
1 câu cố định: one of the most significant developments has been the
ongoing trend towards + V-ing (ĐỀ) among + (đối tượng của đề) + (in
+ phạm vi).
(một trong những sự phát triển nổi bật nhất là xu hướng tang về việc
gì/ đối vs ai đó/ ở đâu đó)
Ex: the internet => V-ing : using the internet = the use of the internet :
In (the) light of technological advancements, one of the most significant
developments has been the ongoing trend towards using the internet
among a large number of users in over the world.
 Mục đích: nêu chủ đề.
Câu 2: trả lời thẳng câu hỏi: trong bài văn này, em sẽ chỉ ra lợi ích +
bất lợi của xu hướng này.
- In this essay, I am going to explore/discuss/ illustrate/ demonstrate
advantages and disadvantages of this tendency.
- While there are certain benefits to this trend, I would argue that its
drawbacks should be considered.
4 mở bài:
In (the) light of technological advancements, one of the most significant
developments has been the ongoing trend towards using the internet
among a large number of users in over the world. While there are
certain benefits to this trend, I would argue that its drawbacks should
be considered.

In (the) light of technological advancements, one of the most significant

developments has been the ongoing trend towards playing computer
games among a large number of children in some parts of the world.
While there are certain benefits to this trend, I would argue that its
drawbacks should be considered.
Toàn TG: in over the world = > in some parts of the world : 1 vài nơi

In (the) light of technological advancements, one of the most significant

developments has been the ongoing trend towards shopping online
among a large number of customers in over the world. While there are
certain benefits to this trend, I would argue that its drawbacks should
be considered.

In (the) light of technological advancements, one of the most significant

developments has been the ongoing trend towards studying abroad
among a large number of students in over the world. While there are
certain benefits to this trend, I would argue that its drawbacks should
be considered.
THÂN BÀI: NÊU LỢI + HẠI :
BODY 1: NÊU LỢI: 5 CÂU: (50 từ copy sẵn)
Câu 1: On the one hand, it is seemingly understandable why many
subscribe to the view that V-ing(Đề) has a crucial impact on + đối
tượng. (1 mặt thì, dường như có thể hiểu dc tại sao nhiều ủng hộ quan
điểm rằng V-ing có ảnh hưởng quan trọng đến Ai đó.
Câu 2: lợi ích 1 : one of the primary benefits of this is that SVO.
**Câu 3: (CHỨNG MINH CÂU 2) (Giair thích cụ thể/ ví dụ/ so sánh/
kết quả)
Câu 4: lợi ích 2: additionally, + SVO. = another argument supporting
this idea can be fortified by the fact that + SVO.
** câu 5: (CHỨNG MINH CÂU 4) (Giair thích cụ thể/ ví dụ/ so sánh/
kết quả)
Nghĩ lơi ích của the internet:
Câu 2 It can help them/ us communicate with many people in different
countries.
Câu 3 This is simply because of the fact that we can chat/ video calls /
send messages to them whenever we want.
- The internet enables=allows people to communicate across the globe
instantly. Platforms like social media, email, allow for maintaining
relationships regardless of distance. For example, families can stay connected
through video calls.
Câu 4 it can offer us a chance to reduce stress after a busy time of
work.
Câu 5 clearly, there are several ways for us to relax such as listening to
music, watching short videos, playing video games, which can help us
to stay away from stress in our real life for a while.
Hoặc: The internet allows for immediate access(truy cập trực tiếp) to news and
updates, helping individuals stay informed (cập nhật) about current events(sự
kiện hiện thời). for example, News websites and apps deliver (mang đến)
 breaking news as it happens, allowing for quick dissemination of important
information(cập nhật nhanh chóng vs thông tin qtrong). (7-8)
Ex:
- The internet provides a vast source of knowledge, making it easy for users to
find information on any topic ranging from science to history. For instance,
students can access online databases and e-books for their studies.
The internet offers various online courses and resources that allow individuals to
learn new skills or enhance their education. Websites like Coursera and Khan
Academy provide free or affordable courses.
Online shopping provides consumers with convenience and a wider selection of
products. Websites like Amazon allow users to compare prices and read reviews
before making a purchase, saving time and effort.
THÂN BÀI 2: NÊU HẠI : 5 CÂU
Câu 1: notwithstanding the aforementioned benefits of + đề, I am
convinced that the popularity of Đề would have a negative influence on
+ ai đó in several ways. (dẫu cho những lợi ích vừa đề cập phía trên
của đề, tôi cũng cho rằng sự phổ biên của đề cũng có ảnh hưởng tiêu
cực đến vơi Ai theo nhiều cách khác nhau).
Câu 2: bất lợi 1 : one of the most pressing concerns of this is SVO.
**Câu 3: (CHỨNG MINH CÂU 2) (Giair thích cụ thể/ ví dụ/ so sánh/
kết quả)
Câu 4: lợi ích 2: another drawback of + chủ đề is + SVO.
** câu 5: (CHỨNG MINH CÂU 4) (Giair thích cụ thể/ ví dụ/ so sánh/
kết quả)
- It can be considered an addictive tool.
- Giải thích: As there are too many appealing things on the internet
like (games, fashion, cosmetics, trends ), we would rather spend
most of our time surfing the internet than focus on our daily
responsibilities such as taking care of family members, doing
housework / doing homework, which can negatively impact our
quality of life.
- Users’ Personal information can be attacked/ stolen/ hacked by
anonymous hackers with wrong purposes such as financial attacks.
This can lead to a lot of bad feelings including anxiety (lo lắng),
anger (giận dữ) or frustration.
KẾT BÀI: 1 CÂU:
In conclusion, while the benefits associated with the popularity of +
đề are undeniable, I would contend that the drawbacks this tendency
poses should be taken into consideration.
Tóm lại, trong khi lợi ích liên quan đến sự phổ biến của Đề là k thể
chối cãi, tôi cũng cho rằng những bất lợi mà xu hướng này gây ra cũng
cần phải được xem xet.
TEMPLATE MẪU:
In (the) light of technological advancements, one of the most significant
developments has been the ongoing trend towards V-ing among AI ĐÓ
+ in PHAM VI. While there are certain benefits to this trend, I would
argue that its drawbacks should be considered.
On the one hand, it is seemingly understandable why many subscribe
to the view that V-ing(Đề) has a crucial impact on + đối tượng. one of
the primary benefits of this is that…… This is simply because of the
fact that …. another argument supporting this idea can be fortified by
the fact that + SVO. For example, ….
Notwithstanding the aforementioned benefits of + đề, I am convinced
that the popularity of Đề would have a negative influence on + ai đó in
several ways. One of the most pressing concerns of this is SVO. ….
another drawback of + chủ đề is + SVO….
In conclusion, while the benefits associated with the popularity of + đề
are undeniable, I would contend that the drawbacks this tendency
poses should be taken into consideration. (177 từ)
Btvn: video giải them bất lợi (ý về sức khỏe).
NGHE : PET PART 1+ 2
Pros of Using the Cons of Using
Explanation/Example Explanation/Example
Internet the Internet
1. Access to The internet provides a 1. Not all information on
Information vast source of Misinformation the internet is accurate.
knowledge, making it Misinformation can
easy for users to find spread rapidly, leading
information on any to confusion. An
Pros of Using the Cons of Using
Explanation/Example Explanation/Example
Internet the Internet
example is the increase
topic. For instance,
of false health
students can access
information, such as
online databases and e-
misleading claims about
books for their studies.
vaccines.
2. Global The internet enables 2. Privacy Risks Sharing personal
Connectivity people to communicate information online can
across the globe lead to privacy breaches
instantly. Platforms like and identity theft. Cases
social media, email, of hacking or data leaks,
allow for maintaining like the Facebook-
relationships regardless Cambridge Analytica
of distance. For scandal, highlight the
example, families can dangers of data misuse.
Pros of Using the Cons of Using
Explanation/Example Explanation/Example
Internet the Internet
stay connected through
video calls.
3. Online The internet offers 3. Addiction Many people find it
Learning various online courses and Distraction hard to limit their time
Opportunities and resources that allow online, leading to
individuals to learn new internet addiction.
skills or enhance their Social media can
education. Websites like distract users from real-
Coursera and Khan life responsibilities,
Academy provide free impacting productivity
or affordable courses. and mental health. For
instance, excessive
scrolling through social
media can lead to
Pros of Using the Cons of Using
Explanation/Example Explanation/Example
Internet the Internet
procrastination.
Increased reliance on
Online shopping
online communication
provides consumers
can lead to a decline in
with convenience and a
face-to-face social skills
wider selection of
4. Reduced and interactions. For
4. E-commerce products. Websites like
Face-to-Face example, people might
and Convenience Amazon allow users to
Interaction struggle with social
compare prices and read
anxiety when meeting in
reviews before making a
person due to
purchase, saving time
overexposure to online
and effort.
interactions.
5. Real-time The internet allows for 5. Health Issues Prolonged internet use
News and immediate access to can lead to health
Pros of Using the Cons of Using
Explanation/Example Explanation/Example
Internet the Internet
news and updates,
problems such as eye
helping individuals stay
strain, poor posture, and
informed about current
sedentary behavior.
events. News websites
Spending hours in front
Updates and apps deliver
of a screen can
breaking news as it
contribute to conditions
happens, allowing for
like obesity and chronic
quick dissemination of
pain.
important information.