大作文模板
首段——描述图画
第一句话：说图画 ①红色标注单词需根据
1.这是一个...样的图画 要写的文章主题进行调
This is a simple but ironic drawing./there are two simple but satirical photos. 整
高级一点：These two photos look ridiculous at the first sight but
though-provoking on the second though.
2.对图画内容进行描述
句型：In the picture,there is a ...,doing...，with...
E.g. In the picture, there is a pretty and graceful American girl,wearing
traditional Chinese costume,with a merry smile on her face.
第二句话：说特点
1.句型：Although ....,...
E.g. Although this aged person has four children ,nobody is willing to look
after him.
第三句话：说文字
1.句型：Finally,several Chinese characters can be noticed,which read that...
E.g. Finally ,several Chinese can be noticed ,which read that the senior
dad become a football in his kid’s eyes.
2.句型：Of course, several Chinese character interpret the intended meaning,
that is /namely,...
E.g.Of course, several Chinese characters interpret the intended
meaning ,that is“having books”versus“reading books”.
中间段——联系现实+阐明意义
1.过渡句：典型特征+联系实际
… is characterized by … and such a scene above can be associated with …
in reality.
2.图画中的现象群体化（如一个老头到很多老人，温室花朵到被过度保护
的小孩，一个美国女孩到很多外国友人）
Admittedly,…, now, …
E.g. Admittedly, some old parents, now, live in a variety of miseries, such
as poverty, loneliness, disease.
3.现象值得关注/赞扬，原因是…
This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning/praising for the reason
that … pay excessive attention to …, ignoring … .
E.g. This phenomenon is particularly worth concerning for the reason that
they pay attention only to these so-called celebrities’ superficial and
fashionable life styles, ignoring the significance of learning the stars’ virtues.
4.强调句表明危害/意义
It is …（主题词）… that … enabled/caused … (not) to …
E.g. It is parents’ over protection that causes young people to build up
inadequate competence or confidence to face the society.
E.g. This virtue is particularly worth praising for the reason that it is their
perseverance that enables them to succeed again and again.
5.深入阐明危害/意义
负面现象：
（1）比喻句
However,（主题词），to my understanding/from my perspective, can be
likened to …
E.g. However, independence, to my understanding, can be likened to a
journey leading to success.
（2）排比句（单独成句或作为定语从句修饰主题词）
E.g. As a significant quality, independence may bring teenagers power,
arouse their enthusiasm/passion for life and help them win in the future social
competition.
（3）总结危害
Unfortunately, /Actually, … have/has constituted an obstacle that
hinder/hinders …
E.g. Actually, this sort of blind worship has constituted an obstacle that
hinders the progress and growth of the young people.
正面现象：
（1）比喻句
（主题词），to my understanding/from my perspective, can be likened
to …
E.g. Cultural communication, to my understanding, can be likened to
bridge, connecting China and the outside world.
（2）排比句（同上）or 举例（题目要求）
例子可以具体写，也可以抽象写与排比句结合
E.g. A case in point is Yao Ming, who has been a renowned basketball
player. After his retirement, he continued to strive and created his own
business. Actually, there are so many celebrities like Yao.
E.g. A typical example is me and my idol is Yao Ming, who brings me
power, arouses my passion for striving and helps me keep moving forward.
尾段——建议措施
1.总结（可省略，也可直接放到第二句里）
Everyone should bear in mind that …
E.g. Meanwhile, we should bear in mind that never can we become slaves
of any technological products, including the Internet and smart phones.
2.社会层面
Hence/To conclude/Accordingly/Then/Thus, the society as a whole should
foster a positive atmosphere to…
3.个人/当事人层面
Furthermore/Meanwhile/In addition, it is advisable for … to …
