Tuesday, November 4, 2025

The End

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"We look pathetic," Lang sighed as he looked at the column.

Without weapons, equipment and helmets, shaggy and unwashed, their greatcoats stained with mud, the platoon didn't look like soldiers anymore. Krafft had to agree with Lang, they looked pathetic.

But they were alive.


Backus had radioed his superior in Magdeburg concerning the prisoners he had gathered up. He didn't tell the man that they had come across the Elbe. His commander was a lazy man who would have told him to send them back to the Soviets, rather than have to deal with them himself. So that little detail was left out.

As it turned out, Backus' commanding officer had met a lady in Magdeburg who he was spending a lot of time with, time he'd rather spend with her than with doing his job.

"How many of the bastards did you bag?" the man wanted to know.

"Roughly forty, Sir. They were separated from their unit, had no support and were tired of fighting, I guess."

"You guess, Captain? The army doesn't pay you to guess."

"Does it really matter what their motivation for surrendering was, Sir? We've got them, I propose to take 'em to Helmstedt, according to messages I've received the army is setting up a collection point for refugees and POWs there."

"Helmstedt, huh?" there was a pause on the line, Backus swore he heard a woman giggling in the background. "Fine, take your whole platoon, we're pulling out anyway, the entire outfit's pulling back to the area around Brunswick."

Backus checked his map, yup, what the American army called Brunswick was Braunschweig to the Germans. It wasn't far from Helmstedt. "We'll pull out tomorrow morning, Sir. Can we get a couple of trucks for the POWs?"

"Hell, Backus, I'm looking at my map, it's like what, 40 miles? Hell, the bastards can still walk can't they?"

"Well, yes, but ..." the line had gone dead. The last thing he'd heard was a woman calling for his commander to "come back to bed."


Niemeyer looked up as Backus came into the shed by the ferry landing, "You look like you've seen better days, Herr Hauptmann."

Backus nodded, "I have but that's a story for another day. Have the prisoners ready to move out tomorrow morning. We're marching to Helmstedt."

"That's sixty kilometers, that's a half-day's walk, in your trucks you could do it in a couple of hours."

"Unfortunately all I have is the two trucks parked outside the townhall, for my men and equipment."

"But certainly you could use them to move the prisoners, they aren't going to run away and ..."

"We're leaving as well, Herr Niemeyer. We've been ordered to pull back to Magdeburg, but you didn't hear that from me. Now if any of your folks need a ride to Helmstedt ..."

"But why would ..." then it struck Niemeyer, the Amis were leaving them to the mercy of the Red Army. "This is insane, Herr Hauptmann, you're leaving us to the verdammte Kommunisten¹!"

"Not my call, Herr Niemeyer. You know as well as I do, 'Befehl ist Befehl.'"² Backus was obviously not happy about this situation. "How many people are left in the village, Horst?"

Niemeyer was surprised, Backus had never addressed him by his given name before, "Perhaps a hundred and fifty, more or less."

"How many capable of walking, oh let's say, sixty kilometers?"

Niemeyer looked at Backus, he wondered if the man was proposing they evacuate their homes.

"Most of them, there are seven or so elderly who might not be able, but we have carts ..."

"Let me make it easy for you, Horst. Have those who wish to accompany us to Helmstedt form up in the village square, by the church, at first light tomorrow. Make sure everyone understands that to stay here is to possibly live under the Russians. It's not certain, but that's what we're hearing."

"When can we return?" Niemeyer had a sick feeling deep in his gut.

"Who can say? I would plan for a very long wait before you could return, if ever."

Niemeyer nodded, "Danke, Herr Hauptmann, I will speak to the people. I will see you tomorrow morning at any rate."


Captain Backus, United States Army, looked over the crowd of people. Well, perhaps a hundred people, not much of a crowd, but in the small square, it seemed like a lot. Horst Niemeyer had told him before sunrise that none of the villagers would be leaving.

"After all, we survived the Nazis, I'm sure we can survive the Communists. There are those in the village who will welcome the change. They say you Americans are too ill-disciplined and Germans need a firm had over them."

Backus shook his head, "Well, I don't know about that, but I understand that people don't want to give up what they know."

"I also have a personal favor to ask of you, Herr Hauptmann."

"And that is?"

"Can you overlook the loss of two prisoners?"

"Krafft and Schmitz, the two love birds, correct?"

"Yes Sir, that is correct."

"Are they staying here?"

"For now, I suppose. They wish to be married by our pastor, as soon as possible."

"I see. Very well, my boss doesn't really care for that matter, so perhaps I shouldn't as well."

"Thank you, if you ever come this way again ..."

"Danke, Herr Niemeyer."


"So I guess this is it." Lang said as he looked around, trying to keep his emotions in check.

"I suppose it is." Krafft was also struggling to keep his composure.

Lang nodded, then snapped to attention, "It has been an honor, Herr Stabsfeldwebel," as he snapped a very crisp army-style salute.

Krafft came to attention as well, returning his old comrade's salute. "Take care of yourself, you old reprobate."

"I will and I have no doubt that Liesl here will have you fully domesticated within a month or so."

Liesl smiled, "It may take a little longer than that but ..." she then hugged Lang, hard. "Do take care, Kurt. Find a good woman, settle down."

Lang was blushing fiercely, he stepped back, gave a short bow and said, "I will, gnädige Frau. If I can find one as special as yourself that is."

Then he turned and walked to the head of the column of German prisoners of war. He stopped and faced the column and barked out the orders. When the column stepped off, though they still looked bedraggled and hard used, pathetic was not a word anyone would use to describe them.

They looked like soldiers.




¹ Damned Communists.
² An order is an order.

42 comments:

  1. Saying good bye to the guy who's had your back for so long and shared the same hardships and risks you've had to endure is ALWAYS hard. Had a lump in my throat when the two brothers-in-arms were saying their good byes.

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  2. Good byes for the soldiers, for the civilians.....what fool would want to live under Communism? Even Socialism? Guess after the Nazis anything might be preferable for some.

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    1. "Guess after the Nazis anything might be preferable for some."
      Sort of why so many Ukrainian kulaks initially welcomed the Nazis after the gentle egalitarianism of the Soviet Union.

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    2. Germans really shot themselves in the foot with brutal racial policies in the East. With a bit of diplomacy and restoration of private farms they would have easy source of millions volunteers to fight Stalin, and they had plenty of captured Soviet weapons to arm with... But, Nazis being themselves, this was against their very core of ideology.

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    3. Nylon12 - Would you leave all you knew behind? Many of those folks didn't, later, it was too late.

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    4. Paweł - Yup, but had they acted differently at this stage of the game, they wouldn't have been Nazis. As you say.

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  3. A very engrossing, complex story, somehow, I suspect it isn't quite finished.

    Good work AF Sarge

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    1. Not finished in one's imagination, but finished on "paper," at least for now.

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  4. Hey Old AFSarge,

    Hindsight being 20/20 I think everyone would have left, afterall the *Ost Deutcher wahr besser kommuniste als die Russe mit die Stasi und alle*. Well anyway, I kinda wonder of the commander took his fluff with him or left her to the tender mercies of the Soviets. I also am sure that the group will walk 40 klicks to get to Helmstedt rather than deal with the soviets either. To see the 2 Kamaraden split up after all they have gone through is kind hard, but war is like that. Hopefully they will meet again....in 40 years?

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    1. There was a reason the Wall was built. GDR was bleeding citizens like there was artery shot...

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    2. MrG - Germans are used to discipline and order, which probably made them better commies than the Russians. But as any Marxist idealogue will tell you, neither practiced "real" Communism. Which only exists on paper and never will exist in reality.

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    3. Paweł - Too true. When the Wall came down, people were NOT fleeing to the DDR.

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  5. A reasonable ending, this is a war story, the end did not have to be reasonable. Thank you!

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    1. All things must pass, seemed as good a time as any to end it.

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  6. Life is like that alot: endings are short and sudden instead of long and drawn out. Although I hope that Liesl and Krafft make it out anyway.

    Thanks Sarge, for a engaging ride and look into a underreported part of history.

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    1. It was fun to write, mostly, there were some dark moments, but they passed.

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  7. An ending. Not a good one, not a bad one, just....an ending. Sort of like real life.

    Krafft and Liesl staying behind is a bit surprising to me, I suspect that they would not be well treated by the Soviets.

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    1. They're staying behind for the moment. Krafft wanted a divorce from the army, and got it.

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    2. If you're of that age, male, German and in Europe you have to be able to account for what you've been doing the last few years. People are going to ask...

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  8. thank you for another good story. (and for the somewhat happy ending)
    il.chuck

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    1. The ending could have been far worse, I thought this one was "reasonable."

      And thanks.

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  9. An interesting read. The questions about what was to come resonated. The borders that were drawn during the occupation made for complicated situations.
    Our float bridge company was tasked with helping a West German town with their water supply. Part of the river they used for water was silted up and the Soviets controlled parts of the river. (Please understand after 60 years I've forgotten the town).Two platoons assembled a mobile ferry and the town supplied an excavator. We used our power boats to move the excavator around the river to dredge the water intakes.
    During the two weeks we were there, the Soviets had two BTR's parked across the river with troops watching us.

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  10. Well done, a totally plausible conclusion tied up in a very believable and compassionate package.
    And, cleverly leaving the author an option to pen a sequel about Herr und Frau Krafft, should he be told to do so by his Muse.
    Enjoyed this one.
    John Blackshoe

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  11. I just reread this again (yeah, about the 5th time to see if I had missed anything, or had a different take on something), then read all the comments. And a phrase popped into my head ex nihilo, "Literary glutton," and set me to thinking that good writing is a lot like good cooking. The consumer is very satisfied at the end, stiated, replete, and thinking, "That was great! I'm stuffed! But I sort of wish I could have another bite."

    Sarge, you are a word-chef of note.

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  12. Bet most of those villagers are gonna regret their decisions.

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    1. I think we can guarantee that. (Hindsight being 20/20)

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  13. A compelling tale. Every now and then I'd remind myself that these are German army. Up until a few weeks ago were up to killing men of the allied forces. Yet here I was rooting for them. Compelling, more than a human interest story; an expose on humanity. Well done.

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    1. Rick - I like looking at the other side of the hill. Although we are often taught that the enemy is not human, they are.

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  14. Drat ! Just one CCKW would do the job. The 2 1/2 ton rating is off road. They were rated five tons on roads. Forty 150 pound Germans is only three tons. ( I know they didn't weigh 150 a piece, as they had been feeding well as of late, but it made the math easier ) They could stand up for the 30 miles. I hope they made it OK.

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  15. Hope I can handle the withdrawal symptoms now. That was an exceptionally riveting tale.

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    1. Thanks, Timbotoo. Hopefully I can come up something new fairly soon.

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