3.5 Same old gimmicks, but we are still here aren't we? I liked it a tad more than the previous one. Less recycling or probably it irked me less... 3.5 Same old gimmicks, but we are still here aren't we? I liked it a tad more than the previous one. Less recycling or probably it irked me less... ...more
There are times I'm not sure I read the same book other people did. This is one of those times. From reviews and blurb I did expect something differenThere are times I'm not sure I read the same book other people did. This is one of those times. From reviews and blurb I did expect something different: gritty, poignant, with some difficult moments.
What I found is the fake-LTGB version of an Harlequin romance (the ones with the unbelievable stories about princes, millionaires and the like).
Let me start with the plot. Yes, Will is beaten and raped. Twice. Is it difficult to read? No. There are no real, detailed descriptions of it. We are told mostly. Some of it (the rape) is off screen. Does it make it any better (or worse)? Again no. Because this is a clear case of telling rather than showing. Nor the characters nor the readers do really feel the brutality. Will doesn't suffer for it. He has no problem in going on living or having sex. He just avoids going to work for a week. (Less problems than a flu.) There's no added burden of being male (in this society) and being raped. The brutality, like the paranormal, is just a label, a layer. It's not real.
Love story. Er. Sorry, what love story? The two see each other and for no apparent reason start an affair (after the rape no less).
I did really wish authors would let the controversial stuff out of their books, if they are not able to be real about it. Was it a bad book? No. It wasn't awful. I didn't dislike or hate it. But sure I'm sorry I bought it.
There are times I'm not sure I read the same book other people did. This is one of those times. From reviews and blurb I did expect something different: gritty, poignant, with some difficult moments.
What I found is the fake-LTGB version of an Harlequin romance (the ones with the unbelievable stories about princes, millionaires and the like).
Let me start with the plot. Yes, Will is beaten and raped. Twice. Is it difficult to read? No. There are no real, detailed descriptions of it. We are told mostly. Some of it (the rape) is off screen. Does it make it any better (or worse)? Again no. Because this is a clear case of telling rather than showing. Nor the characters nor the readers do really feel the brutality. Will doesn't suffer for it. He has no problem in going on living or having sex. He just avoids going to work for a week. (Less problems than a flu.) There's no added burden of being male (in this society) and being raped. The brutality, like the paranormal, is just a label, a layer. It's not real.
Love story. Er. Sorry, what love story? The two see each other and for no apparent reason start an affair (after the rape no less).
I did really wish authors would let the controversial stuff out of their books, if they are not able to be real about it. Was it a bad book? No. It wasn't awful. I didn't dislike or hate it. But sure I'm sorry I bought it.
A bitter sweet love story. I can't call this book really a romance, as it's set in a world where slavery is a reality. There's no real love between maA bitter sweet love story. I can't call this book really a romance, as it's set in a world where slavery is a reality. There's no real love between master and slave, as there is no equality. I can't call it exactly BSDM erotica, as there is no consent.
Still, there is love and some freedom, even if dearly paid, and they save the day.
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A bitter sweet love story. I can't call this book really a romance, as it's set in a world where slavery is a reality. There's no real love between master and slave, as there is no equality. I can't call it exactly BSDM erotica, as there is no consent.
Still, there is love and some freedom, even if dearly paid, and they save the day....more
Do we really need this kind of stories? Do we need a heroine to be this special?
This book is one humongous cliché, from characters to plot.
- Slight oDo we really need this kind of stories? Do we need a heroine to be this special?
This book is one humongous cliché, from characters to plot.
- Slight overweight (but hourglass -figured) "normal" heroine who at the end of the novella is this super wonderful Mary Sue with special powers. - Big, large shouldered alpha who loses control as soon as he sees "normal" gal. - Treason, overcome by said heroine who discovers how much special she is.
Sigh, it was a waste of time (both to read and review).
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Do we really need this kind of stories? Do we need a heroine to be this special?
This book is one humongous cliché, from characters to plot.
- Slight overweight (but hourglass -figured) "normal" heroine who at the end of the novella is this super wonderful Mary Sue with special powers. - Big, large shouldered alpha who loses control as soon as he sees "normal" gal. - Treason, overcome by said heroine who discovers how much special she is.
Sigh, it was a waste of time (both to read and review)....more
A nice, if predictable, novella on a couple of alpha (of course) shifters. Kudos to the author: even with the usual mate stuff, she gives some time anA nice, if predictable, novella on a couple of alpha (of course) shifters. Kudos to the author: even with the usual mate stuff, she gives some time and space to the heroine. I'm only sorry for the use of (view spoiler)[miscarriage (hide spoiler)] as a deus ex machina. Too difficult a subject to treat it so quickly.
Character coherence went to hell with a minor one: Rynard. You don't move from would-be rapist to "nice" guy.
A few hints given go nowhere (like the stolen silver scalpel).
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A nice, if predictable, novella on a couple of alpha (of course) shifters. Kudos to the author: even with the usual mate stuff, she gives some time and space to the heroine. I'm only sorry for the use of (view spoiler)[miscarriage (hide spoiler)] as a deus ex machina. Too difficult a subject to treat it so quickly.
Character coherence went to hell with a minor one: Rynard. You don't move from would-be rapist to "nice" guy.
A few hints given go nowhere (like the stolen silver scalpel)....more
Difficult to rate this mix of urban fantasy, futuristic post apocalyptic world with a strong dash of PNR.
Pros: -- Good world-building -- Plot3 1/2 stars
Difficult to rate this mix of urban fantasy, futuristic post apocalyptic world with a strong dash of PNR.
Pros: -- Good world-building -- Plot: clear, intriguing, without any hole -- Good characters development, no black or white card-boards, but real fictional people with flaws.
Con: --None really. It's my preferences that fault this as a PNR more than UF story (which I prefer).
I found the team Rogers a hit or miss for me, but this series (like Wilder's Mate) is definitely my cup.
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3 1/2 stars
Difficult to rate this mix of urban fantasy, futuristic post apocalyptic world with a strong dash of PNR.
Pros: -- Good world-building -- Plot: clear, intriguing, without any hole -- Good characters development, no black or white card-boards, but real fictional people with flaws.
Con: --None really. It's my preferences that fault this as a PNR more than UF story (which I prefer).
I found the team Rogers a hit or miss for me, but this series (like Wilder's Mate) is definitely my cup....more
I love the world-building in this series, the magic mixed with science, the vampire and the alchemist. I love the world much more than I feel the3 1/2
I love the world-building in this series, the magic mixed with science, the vampire and the alchemist. I love the world much more than I feel the romance :) (which is sweet, but short. All Rogers' book are novellas, from what I gather.)
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3 1/2
I love the world-building in this series, the magic mixed with science, the vampire and the alchemist. I love the world much more than I feel the romance :) (which is sweet, but short. All Rogers' book are novellas, from what I gather.)...more
Updated 4/2014. Lowered rating to one star. I tried to re-read it and found it pretty awful.
Original review
One of the better books from EC I've read lUpdated 4/2014. Lowered rating to one star. I tried to re-read it and found it pretty awful.
Original review
One of the better books from EC I've read lately. Still, I can't say I'm particularly overwhelmed by this book. It's an ok read, but one that tells the same story you have read in other PNR. Same old, same old.
It has a interesting plot and a potential in conflict that would have been really interesting. Unfortunately, there is no conflict at all: between the hero and heroine (a "rogue" wolf entering without permission into an other pack's land) due to the mating heat (say hello to your brain and will power), between the hero and his friend (even with a traitor in the mist), among the Pack, etcetera.
There was no real feelings involved in the couple, at least nothing I could perceive. But then if a couple is having sex even before they met, do they need feelings? (Cheap sarcasm, I know). So, an ok read. But nothing I'll remember after today.
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Updated 4/2014. Lowered rating to one star. I tried to re-read it and found it pretty awful.
Original review
One of the better books from EC I've read lately. Still, I can't say I'm particularly overwhelmed by this book. It's an ok read, but one that tells the same story you have read in other PNR. Same old, same old.
It has a interesting plot and a potential in conflict that would have been really interesting. Unfortunately, there is no conflict at all: between the hero and heroine (a "rogue" wolf entering without permission into an other pack's land) due to the mating heat (say hello to your brain and will power), between the hero and his friend (even with a traitor in the mist), among the Pack, etcetera.
There was no real feelings involved in the couple, at least nothing I could perceive. But then if a couple is having sex even before they met, do they need feelings? (Cheap sarcasm, I know). So, an ok read. But nothing I'll remember after today....more
Second book in a series. I liked the first one, I thought it original and interesting. Unfortunately, this second story is less compelling and more "sSecond book in a series. I liked the first one, I thought it original and interesting. Unfortunately, this second story is less compelling and more "standard". I didn't connect with the characters.
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Second book in a series. I liked the first one, I thought it original and interesting. Unfortunately, this second story is less compelling and more "standard". I didn't connect with the characters....more
I bought and read this book in 2010, but I forgot to add to my read shelf, god knows why.
I read it again today, and if it lost some shine, it's still
I bought and read this book in 2010, but I forgot to add to my read shelf, god knows why.
I read it again today, and if it lost some shine, it's still a pity the author has disappeared completely from the publishing world. The story is not really tight, and it suffers from this, plus some things are way too easily resolved. Still, it reads as easily :)
If you plan to buy the book, remember it has been written in 2010, before the big pnr explosion, and that there's no sequel. (The story is totally contained, though.)
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I bought and read this book in 2010, but I forgot to add to my read shelf, god knows why.
I read it again today, and if it lost some shine, it's still a pity the author has disappeared completely from the publishing world. The story is not really tight, and it suffers from this, plus some things are way too easily resolved. Still, it reads as easily :)
If you plan to buy the book, remember it has been written in 2010, before the big pnr explosion, and that there's no sequel. (The story is totally contained, though.)...more
One of the better in this series so far. Still no reason for some sex scenes. Yes, I get that it's erotica, but I still need a strong reasoning. And<3
One of the better in this series so far. Still no reason for some sex scenes. Yes, I get that it's erotica, but I still need a strong reasoning. And here the only reason beyond some choices is "add sex and sell more". (view spoiler)[The "mystic" sex scenes to "braid" were useless, and confusing as hell. They weren't needed in the story. It was just a ruse to add multiple partners sex with a hint of m/m. (hide spoiler)]
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<3
One of the better in this series so far. Still no reason for some sex scenes. Yes, I get that it's erotica, but I still need a strong reasoning. And here the only reason beyond some choices is "add sex and sell more". (view spoiler)[The "mystic" sex scenes to "braid" were useless, and confusing as hell. They weren't needed in the story. It was just a ruse to add multiple partners sex with a hint of m/m. (hide spoiler)]...more
I gave it a 2 star review when I read it the first time, but I don't think it is a good ranking and lowered to one. It is unreadable a second time aroI gave it a 2 star review when I read it the first time, but I don't think it is a good ranking and lowered to one. It is unreadable a second time around. There's a good idea somewhere but as this is erotica it's drowned in sex and absurdity. I can't call it erotic romance either as there's no romance, they have sex as soon as they meet and call it love. Plus, she keeps saying no and doing the opposite for the sake of the story. Doormat doesn't cover it. I didn't feel the chemistry nor the romance, but I would have liked a stronger story.
Original review
I started this book with lower expectation. It is an Ellora's Cave imprint after all. The blurb was interesting, tough, and the sample intriguing.
The plot was good and the sex scenes balanced enough (meaning you don't have a sex sandwich: sex, sex, action, sex, sex). Unfortunately, at some point I started expecting more :) The book was leaning toward UF and I liked this a lot. But, at the end it is an Ellora's cave imprint and this means no editing: the story needed world-building (or you miss the reason behind some things), tighter scenes and an overall check (there were a few phrases missing). The characters needed some more flesh (and back story!) and to be more coherent, i.e. the lead woman was written off as a strong witch, both in power and personality. We are told, for example, that Serena is the only witch working for the Protectorate. But then she is very easily manipulated and bullied by Marcus. (The scene with her mother was really unbelievable. A perfect wtf? moment).
As my Halloween treat, it wasn't good enough. And it did not survive the second reading test: abandoned without much thought.
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I gave it a 2 star review when I read it the first time, but I don't think it is a good ranking and lowered to one. It is unreadable a second time around. There's a good idea somewhere but as this is erotica it's drowned in sex and absurdity. I can't call it erotic romance either as there's no romance, they have sex as soon as they meet and call it love. Plus, she keeps saying no and doing the opposite for the sake of the story. Doormat doesn't cover it. I didn't feel the chemistry nor the romance, but I would have liked a stronger story.
Original review
I started this book with lower expectation. It is an Ellora's Cave imprint after all. The blurb was interesting, tough, and the sample intriguing.
The plot was good and the sex scenes balanced enough (meaning you don't have a sex sandwich: sex, sex, action, sex, sex). Unfortunately, at some point I started expecting more :) The book was leaning toward UF and I liked this a lot. But, at the end it is an Ellora's cave imprint and this means no editing: the story needed world-building (or you miss the reason behind some things), tighter scenes and an overall check (there were a few phrases missing). The characters needed some more flesh (and back story!) and to be more coherent, i.e. the lead woman was written off as a strong witch, both in power and personality. We are told, for example, that Serena is the only witch working for the Protectorate. But then she is very easily manipulated and bullied by Marcus. (The scene with her mother was really unbelievable. A perfect wtf? moment).
As my Halloween treat, it wasn't good enough. And it did not survive the second reading test: abandoned without much thought....more