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Off Sides (Off, #1)
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bookshelves: and-these-are-the-days-of-our-lives, cross-ur-legs-dude-i-see-ur-vagina
Apr 05, 2013
bookshelves: and-these-are-the-days-of-our-lives, cross-ur-legs-dude-i-see-ur-vagina
Juvenile and simplistic writing. Boring unoriginal plotline. Silly dialogue.
The entire book reads a 13 year old girls journal complete with all her immature romantic fantasies of what college will be like. One dimensional characterizations. Of the MC's along with all of the secondary characters. The H doesn't talk or think like a guy at all. Not even a nice guy. He sounds like what a young girl wants a guy to be like but has no experience to go on.
Some of Ryans thoughts....
"I'm not making love to you tonight.' When we finally come together it will be perfect."
They went on a date, he doesn't call her for a week then when he asks to talk to her she thinks hes breaking up with her. They went on one date. Ryan mentions the making love thing the first night.
"Its certainly not happening to fast for me. I feel like a teenage boy getting ready to have sex for the first time."
Bottom line it was awful. Wish I could get the time I spent reading it back.
The entire book reads a 13 year old girls journal complete with all her immature romantic fantasies of what college will be like. One dimensional characterizations. Of the MC's along with all of the secondary characters. The H doesn't talk or think like a guy at all. Not even a nice guy. He sounds like what a young girl wants a guy to be like but has no experience to go on.
Some of Ryans thoughts....
"I'm not making love to you tonight.' When we finally come together it will be perfect."
They went on a date, he doesn't call her for a week then when he asks to talk to her she thinks hes breaking up with her. They went on one date. Ryan mentions the making love thing the first night.
"Its certainly not happening to fast for me. I feel like a teenage boy getting ready to have sex for the first time."
Bottom line it was awful. Wish I could get the time I spent reading it back.
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Reading Progress
April 5, 2013
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Started Reading
April 5, 2013
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April 5, 2013
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7.0%
""Why is someone so smart working at a diner?" That is a very good question. Why would a smart college student work at a diner? Its obvious she's not that smart. If she was she would've found a way to have been rich from birth. Duh!"
April 6, 2013
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10.0%
"Wow. Bringing the rich boy to a soup kitchen on your first date. Super original. I swear that's the exact storyline of a movie I saw. Have to think of what it was."
April 6, 2013
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39.0%
"Ugh! I feel like I'm reading a lesbian romance. They're making out and the guy's thinking about making love and how he doesn't want to rush her. When they come together everything will be perfect. Gag! Cross your legs dude. Your vaginas showing!"
April 7, 2013
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53.0%
"The word you want is duel not dual. They look alike but mean very different things. I feel like I'm reading a 13 yr old girls romantic fantasies of what college will be like. What college guy calls sex making love? The dude doesn't sound like a guy. Not even a nice guy. He reads like what a young girl dreams of guys being like. Before shes gained any experience or knowledge. The writing is juvenile & simplistic."
April 7, 2013
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61.0%
""Covering her body completely I begin to kiss her. Long slow strokes, rimming the inside of her teeth, licking her lips, pulling on her tongue." WTF kind of kiss is that? Could you possibly make it sound more sloppy and disgusting? She's gonna have drool all over her damn face!"
April 7, 2013
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Finished Reading
April 10, 2013
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and-these-are-the-days-of-our-lives
April 10, 2013
– Shelved as:
cross-ur-legs-dude-i-see-ur-vagina
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