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Outlaw by Nicole  James
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Did not finish! I finally gave up at 76%

I usually refrain from rating books I don't finish, BUT this one upset me to such a degree I had to respond and give it one star! The first half of the book was okay. I was captivated and intrigued. The second half, however, jumped shark. It fell apart and felt like an entirely different story. It became rushed, discombobulated, and sloppy. Not to mention, the hero went from someone I liked to someone I despised. (view spoiler) I finally gave up! I'd had enough!
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April 19, 2013 – Shelved
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message 1: by Nic (new)

Nic Wow, it must have been terrible to give up! I hope you have better luck with the next book you read. :)


Kristen Thank you, NicStar. Very few books rub me wrong, this one did. It just didn't work for me. Others loved it though. :)


Bryanna Nicole Sorry it was a DNF for you Kristen. I completely agree about Cole. I liked him at the beginning but then... it seemed really out of character and out of the blue. Guess that's why it was added but I did finish even though I had to remind myself that KA isn't the only one who writes motorcycle books and be nice enough to chalk some BIG things up to simple coincidences.


message 4: by Kristen (last edited Apr 19, 2013 02:05AM) (new) - rated it 1 star

Kristen Thanks Nicole. Yeah, you're right, Cole did feel a little out of character during the second part of the book. What sealed the deal for me (view spoiler)


Kristen You're welcome, Jill. It's been a long time since a book has made me so mad. You would not like this one. I was enjoying it until the second half of the book jumped shark.


✿ℎazℯℓ - thℯ ℛock Cℎick ℱairy✿ Thank you for this very honest review, Ms.Kristen. I was planning on reading this one tomorrow that I'm so glad I checked out others' opinions first (thank you, GOODREADS). I wouldn't want to read about a hero who's like this. -,-


message 7: by Vicki (new) - added it

Vicki Wow Kristen, thanks for the honest review. I had put this one on my TBR but it's not for me. Just wow!


Kristen ✿ℎazℯℓ✿ wrote: "Thank you for this very honest review, Ms.Kristen. I was planning on reading this one tomorrow that I'm so glad I checked out others' opinions first (thank you, GOODREADS). I wouldn't want to read..."

Thank you, Hazel. This book has gotten mostly good reviews but it didn't work for me. I hope you read a few more reviews before you decide not to read this book. :)


Kristen Vicki wrote: "Wow Kristen, thanks for the honest review. I had put this one on my TBR but it's not for me. Just wow!"

You're welcome, Vicki. It's no a book for me either. I'm still shocked by the heroes behavior in the second half of the story.


message 10: by Geri Reads (new)

Geri Reads Great review, Kristen. I would run for the hills too if I read something like that.


message 11: by Amanda (new)

Amanda Had me at biker and then your review completely turned me off. Thanks for the heads up!


message 12: by Baba (new)

Baba  I quote my GR friend Bianca:

(view spoiler)

That would not work for me at all. And now after reading your review I think it's safe to say that I wouldn't enjoy this book. Great review, Kristen!


SueBee★bring me an alpha!★ Great review Kristen! Thanks for the heads-up [book being moved to pass shelf]


message 14: by Jane (new)

Jane Turner Great review Kristen.
I decided to not read this book anyway and now that I read your review I see that I was right


message 15: by Stephanie (new)

Stephanie OMG,that is just horrible


message 16: by La-Lionne (new)

La-Lionne Doesn't sound good :-S. I'll pass on this one.


Kristen Geri's ~ EverAfterRomance ~ wrote: "Great review, Kristen. I would run for the hills too if I read something like that."

Thanks Geri. I know many liked this book and rated it high, but it sure didn't work for me.


Kristen Amanda wrote: "Had me at biker and then your review completely turned me off. Thanks for the heads up!"

I felt the same as you, Amanda. I was all for reading gritty biker book and liked what I was reading until the second half of the book.


message 19: by Sunny (new)

Sunny Oh, thank goodness, I book I can actually take OFF my TBR list!


Stacy Oh no! This is why I need to read reviews before I buy. Now I'm stuck with it. I'm glad I read the spoilers, though, as maybe it will dull the pain if I know what's to come.


Kristen Baba ♥♥♥ Marcus, Tyler, Tate, Dan, Ty, & Hunter wrote: "I quote my GR friend Bianca:

[spoilers removed]

That would not work for me at all. And now after reading your review I think it's safe to say that I wouldn't enjoy this book. Great review, Kristen!"


This book would so not work for you, Baba. Yeah, I never really bought into that part you put into the spoiler, but I still let it work for me. It was the second half of the book that pushed me past my limits. Thanks hon!


Kristen ★SueBee★bring me an alpha!★ wrote: "Great review Kristen! Thanks for the heads-up [book being moved to pass shelf]"

You're welcome, SueBee. ((Hugs))


Kristen Gladys wrote: "Great review Kristen.
I decided to not read this book anyway and now that I read your review I see that I was right"


Thank you, Glady. <3


message 24: by Rica (new) - added it

Rica Oh thank you for the review. I will put it on the very bottom of the list, if that.


Kristen Stephanie wrote: "OMG,that is just horrible"

I agree.


Kristen La-Lionne wrote: "Doesn't sound good :-S. I'll pass on this one."

Thanks La-Lionne. Many liked this book but it didn't work for me. :)


Kristen Sunny wrote: "Oh, thank goodness, I book I can actually take OFF my TBR list!"

Lol. I know the feeling. I have too many books on my TBR list too. :)


message 28: by Kristen (last edited Apr 19, 2013 01:49PM) (new) - rated it 1 star

Kristen Stacy wrote: "Oh no! This is why I need to read reviews before I buy. Now I'm stuck with it. I'm glad I read the spoilers, though, as maybe it will dull the pain if I know what's to come."

Thanks Stacy. There have been a lot of people who liked this book and you may find you're one of them. Like you said, knowing what to expect always helps lessen the blow. I know that's been the case with a few books I've read. I hope the book works for you. :)


Kristen Rica wrote: "Oh thank you for the review. I will put it on the very bottom of the list, if that."

You're welcome, Rica! ((Hugs))


Kristen ❤Summer wrote: "Good thing I saw your review, I was gonna buy it! Thanks for the heads up!"

You're welcome, Summer. :)


message 31: by Vashti (new)

Vashti Kristen,I trust your reviews, so thanks for the heads up on this one.Passing and I usu like the biker books.


Sharon ∞❥ is an emotional book junkie ❥∞ sorry to hear that about this one...i didnt read ur spoiler but im sooo curious!


message 33: by Aimz (new)

Aimz Yeah.. I'll pass on this one.


KindleRomance Reviews Wow! Pass!!!


message 35: by Ingie (new)

Ingie Good and honerst review Kristen. There are those that make gr so good.

When I saw that you DNF and read about the terrible things that happened, I immediately took this book off my "maybe read shelf." Several of these MC romances seem to have most harrowing scenes, or at least be too raw for me.


message 36: by Duchess Nicole (new)

Duchess Nicole I am so wary about these MC books. I know i will be staying away from this one. No good feelings anywhere!


❤️ Dorsey aka Wrath Lover Reviews ❤️ Fantastic honest review Kristen!!


Lise *friends don't flag* Spot on review of this one, Kristen.


Blacky *Romance Addict* Oh my god woman! No wonder you dnf-ed :OOO
Definitely not for me either :SS Thanks for the warning!!!


message 40: by Ellelou (new)

Ellelou Wow, just read the spoiler....wow, speechless ....


message 41: by Penny (new)

Penny Watson This review makes me want to curl up in the fetal position with a handful of Julie Garwood historicals. *whimper*


message 42: by Baba (new)

Baba  Kristen wrote: "Baba ♥♥♥ Marcus, Tyler, Tate, Dan, Ty, & Hunter wrote: "I quote my GR friend Bianca:

[spoilers removed]

That would not work for me at all. And now after reading your review I think it's safe to..."


I just returned it to amazon a couple of minutes ago. Thanks for your review, Kristen. <3


message 43: by Laura (Kyahgirl) (new)

Laura (Kyahgirl) I'm glad you put the spoiler in there because it encompasses a couple of plot devices and tropes that I can't stand to read about!


Kristen Vashti wrote: "Kristen,I trust your reviews, so thanks for the heads up on this one.Passing and I usu like the biker books."

You're welcome, Vashti. I'm with you, I love a good biker book but this one did not work for me. Not at all.


message 45: by Kristen (last edited Apr 20, 2013 11:12AM) (new) - rated it 1 star

Kristen Lisa wrote: "Thanks for the review, Kristen! I read the spoiler and that would definitely make me stop reading the book. Sorry this one did not work out."

Thanks hon. The more I think about this book the more upset I become. You know I love sexy bikers, even if they border on the anti-hero side, but this biker was nothing to swoon over.


Kristen ♠ Sharon is an emotional book junkie ♠ wrote: "sorry to hear that about this one...i didnt read ur spoiler but im sooo curious!"

Thanks Sharon. I know what you like in books and I really encourage you to read my spoiler before starting this one. At least you'll be prepared.


Sharon ∞❥ is an emotional book junkie ❥∞ thanks Kristen...i broke down and did. ugh...not that i mind all that emotional drama but the part that i dont like is not liking the H!


message 48: by Karla (new)

Karla Great review Kristen! Sounds like a bunch of over-fabricated nonsense, just for the sake of drama.


message 49: by StScho (new) - added it

StScho Yuck! Yeah. That's a deal breaker @ "down the stairs". That sucks because I was actually looking forward to this one. Oh well, there are hundreds more in my queue anyways...


Kristen Aimz wrote: "Yeah.. I'll pass on this one."

It wasn't my cuppa but it did work for some. :)


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