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PART 1: SHORT MESSAGE
1. WHAT ARE THE TASKS IN PART 1?
      a. An email will be given as a form of question for you to reply.
      b. An email template will be prepared for you to write in.
      c. The email should be at about 80 words
      d. It requires a personal and concrete response on general social and everyday
         matters
      e. You MUST complete writing it.
2. AN EXAMPLE OF THE QUESTION
3. ANALYSING THE QUESTION
   a. A scene is set where
      1. Amy just moved to your town
      2. The school holidays have started
      Therefore, in your email
      1. The name Amy should be the receiver
      2. The ideas of school holidays should be highlighted or mentioned
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   b. Task includes certain points (put into questions) which you MUST answer
      1. Where shall we go?
      2. What can we do there?
      3. What should we bring?
      Failure to address any one of the questions means a task is not fulfilled which affects
      the Content mark.
   c. Set in an INFORMAL closing (I’ll be waiting for your reply. Bye!) to show that it is an
     INFORMAL exchange between friends. The email reply or your answer should
     also be INFORMAL and FRIENDLY
   d. Answer template will be given with the question for candidates to use
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4. ASSESSMENT CRITERIA
                      COMMUNICATIVE                ORGANISATION                 LANGUAGE
  CONTENT              ACHIEVEMENT
       5                       5                            5                        5
 Contents are            Communicate                  Uses simple               Use basic
  relevant to        straightforward ideas            connectors                vocabulary
      task          using the correct tone &       (and, so, but, yet)         appropriately
                        informal register            appropriately
   Reader is                                                                    Use simple
 fully informed                                  Use limited number of          grammatical
  of the ideas                                      cohesive devices           forms in good
   described                                     (however, therefore, in      degree of control
                                                    addition, hence)
                                                      appropriately           Meaning can be
                                                                                determined
                                                                              although errors
                                                                               are noticeable
5. SAMPLE ANSWER
  To: Amygirl@bookface.com
  Subject: Picnic
  Hi Amy,
  I am so glad that you have brought this up as I had nothing planned for the holidays. I
  am totally excited and I know just the place for our picnic. It will be at Central Park just
  beside East Road. We could also play ball there as the park is huge. Don’t forget to bring
  an extra mat to place our foods on just in case I lost mine. Don’t worry about the
  supplies, I can handle them, though you could bring some snacks if you would like too.
  The more, the better. I was also thinking that we could have Jack and David come. It
  will be more fun with them around. Alright, do update me if something comes up. Bye!
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6. ANALYSING THE ANSWER
 Hi Amy,
 I am so glad that you have brought this up as I had nothing planned for the holidays. I am
 totally excited and I know just the place for our picnic. It will be at Central Park just beside
 East Road ①. We could also play ball there as the park is huge.② Don’t forget to bring an
 extra matt to place our foods on just in case I lost mine. ③ Don’t worry about the supplies,
 I can handle them, though you could bring some snacks if you would like too. The more,
 the better. I was also thinking that we could have Jack     and David come. It will be more
 fun with them around. Alright, do update me if something comes up. Bye!
                         COMMUNICATIVE             ORGANISATION               LANGUAGE
     CONTENT              ACHIEVEMENT
           5                       5                        5                        5
 All content relevant    Uses straightforward     Uses cohesive devices   Uses basic vocabulary
 to task                 ideas                    appropriately           which is relevant to
  Where shall we                                                         the topic
      go? ①              Consistent friendly                              appropriately
  What can we do        tone in informal                                 Uses simple
      there? ②           register                                         grammatical forms
  What should we                                                         with a good degree
      bring? ③                                                            of control
                                                                          Mostly compound
 Reader is fully
                                                                          and complex
 informed about the                                                       sentences
 planned picnic
                                                                          Simple error
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7. TECHNIQUES TO WRITE
                                         Content +
   Friendly opening                  WH Questions +                      Friendly ending
                                     Cohesive Devices
    FRIENDLY OPENINGS                    CONTENT                    FRIENDLY ENDINGS
 Hi!                            Highlight questions in the      Bye!
 Hello                          email that you need to          Bye for now.
 How are you?                   answer e.g.                     See you soon.
 How are things?                1. Where to have picnic         Speak to you later.
 How is it going?               2. What to do there             That’s all for now.
 It’s good to hear from you!    3. What to bring                Write soon!
                                                                Write back soon!
 Not advisable to use           Answer particularly to the
 I hope you are in the pink /   questions asked and do not      Not advisable to use other
 pink of health (old usage)     divert the focus of questions   languages like adios
                                                                amigos/sayonara/annyeong
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8. PRACTICE 1
You received an email from your friend Ali who is from Selangor.
               Hi Mona,
               I am going to Terengganu this weekend with my
               family. My parents really wanted to visit the beautiful
               beaches there. Where would be the best place to go?
               Where to stay? What family activities can we do there?
               Reply soon and take care!
Now write an email to your friend in about 80 words. Write your answer below.
Use the notes in techniques to write to fill in the table.
  FRIENDLY                                    CONTENT                            FRIENDLY
  OPENINGS                                                                       ENDINGS
                  Where is the best        Where to stay?      What family
                      place?                                 activities to do?
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9. PRACTICE 2
Now, write an email using the information from the table in Practice 1 with appropriate
cohesive devices.
10. PRACTICE 3
You received an email from your sister Maria who is asking for your opinion.
              Hi Nisa,
              I need to know what reference book you are using for
              Maths. I’m looking for a good one for your niece Emma
              as she is taking SPM this year. Where can I get the book
              and how much does it cost?
              Bye for now!
Now write an email to your sister in about 80 words. Write your answer below.
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