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A Balanced Diet
PART 1: Read the paragraph below. Highlight (in yellow) the error in
each numbered sentence. Then answer the questions about
how to
correct the errors by underlining one of the letters [a-c].

(1) Follow these tree tips to ensure you are eating a healthy,
balanced diet. (2) first, your diet should be colorful – naturally
colorful, not full of artificial dyes. (3) Eating plenty of fresh fruits and
vegetables will ensures you get plenty of color in your diet. (4) And
if you are getting color, then you are getting vitamins, minerals, and
fytonutrients. (5) Second, shop around the perimeter of the
supermarket; thats where the real food is: the meats, dairy, fruits and
vegetables. (6) Third, don’t eat anything out of a box that contains
more than five ingredient. (7) Eating good couldn’t be simpler!

1. ( a) there (b) three ( c) free

2. ( a)first your (b) first diet ( c) First, your

3. ( a) ensure (b) ensured ( c) ensuring

4. ( a) (b) nutrients ( c)
fightonutrients phytonutrients
5. ( a) that (b) that’s ( c) there’s

6. ( a) ingredients (b) greedy ( c) ingradient

7. ( a) Eating Good (b) eating good ( c) Eating well

PART 2: Read the essay below. Analyze how to improve this essay in
terms of its task fulfillment, cohesion, vocabulary usage and grammatical
structures.
Essay Question:
Many efforts have been made by countries to address challenges concerning the
environment, but the situation has not improved.
What are the possible reasons for environmental degradation?
Are there any solutions to combat this problem?
Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Essay:
Recently, many afforts have been given by countries to address challenges concerning
the environment, but the now has not improved. There are many reason for
environmental degradation. This essay will analyze several reasons and give some
solutions to tackle this isue.

Firstly, the main reason is the economic has to growth. Countries need money for
increase the GDP (total nation product), so they interested in the environment not
enough. If they improve it, they have to spend money for this content, that will impact on
the economical.

Secondly, nations not enough human force can knowlegd and deep studying about this
field. For examble, countries want to improve the environment, they need reaserch and
teaching for people can know the law and technical. But it is difficult to suply in short
time.

In conclusion, countries made many efforts to address changllenges concerning the


environment, but it has not improved, this because nations not enough money and work-
force to tackle it as mentioned above.

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