Automated Essay Scoring with Uncertainty Quantification

Data Science Capstone Project 2025
Author: David Haberlah
Data Source: Sample from an Australian Department of Education de-identified and developed for educational research purposes

Uncertainty-aware automated essay scoring system matching commercial accuracy benchmarks (r=0.868, QWK=0.861) while adding transparent confidence intervals and intelligent deferral capabilities. Achieves 6/8 NAPLAN component deployment thresholds at 21.5% deferral rate with edge-deployable architecture.

• Key Innovation
• Performance Summary
• Quick Start
• Project Structure
• Methodology
• Results
• Deployment Architecture
• Limitations & Future Work
• Citation
• License & Acknowledgements

Commercial automated essay scoring (AES) systems achieve competitive accuracy but operate as "black boxes" — teachers cannot distinguish borderline cases from clear-cut scores, leading to either blind acceptance or complete manual review.

This system addresses the black box problem through feature-based difficulty prediction enabling intelligent deferral:

Core Innovation: After hyperparameter tuning yielded zero improvement (+0.0000 average QWK), we pivoted to intelligent deferral via feature-based difficulty prediction achieving r=0.731 correlation with actual scoring errors — enabling 6/8 threshold compliance at 78.5% automation rate.

• Size: 15,479 expert-marked essays
• Task: NAPLAN persuasive writing assessment(Year 5, ages 10-11)
• Scoring: Total score 0-32, plus 8 component traits 0-4 each
• Components: TextStructure, Ideas, Paragraphs, Vocabulary, Cohesion, SentenceStructure, Punctuation, Spelling

Achievement: 6/8 components meet deployment thresholds on 78.5% of essays (1,823/2,322 retained after 21.5% deferral)

Total Score Performance:

• This system: r=0.868, QWK=0.861 (LightGBM baseline)
• Deployment threshold: QWK ≥0.75 (Williamson et al., 2012)
• Human inter-rater: QWK 0.745 (Ormerod et al., 2025)
• Commercial range: QWK 0.75-0.82 (Chen, 2016; Rudner et al., 2006)
• Academic SOTA: QWK 0.941 (Iqbal et al., 2024)

Component Performance (vs Human Baselines):

• Paragraphs: 81% of human inter-rater reliability (0.709 vs 0.88, Su et al., 2025)
• Punctuation: 83% of human ceiling (0.713 vs 0.86, Su et al., 2025)
• Spelling: 78% of human ceiling (0.723 vs 0.93, Su et al., 2025)
• Average: 82% of human inter-rater agreement across 7 components

• Python: 3.11.14 (tested environment)
• Platform: macOS with Apple Silicon (M1/M2/M3/M4) for full functionality
• RAM: 16GB minimum, 32GB+ recommended for feedback generation
• Storage: ~620MB for complete repository (database 159MB, models 3.5MB, outputs 28MB)

# 1. Clone repository
git clone https://github.com/haberlah/automated-essay-scoring.git
cd automated-essay-scoring

# 2. Create conda environment
conda create -n aes python=3.11.14
conda activate aes

# 3. Install dependencies
pip install -r requirements.txt

# 4. Download spaCy language model (150 MB)
python -m spacy download en_core_web_md

# 5. Download NLTK corpora
python -m nltk.downloader punkt words

# 6. Verify installation
python -c "import lightgbm, mlx_lm, spacy; nlp = spacy.load('en_core_web_md'); print('✓ Installation successful')"

Platform Notes:

• MLX-LM (feedback generation): Requires Apple Silicon. Linux/Windows users see Alternative Deployment
• LightGBM models (scoring): Cross-platform compatible

# Launch Jupyter from notebook directory
cd notebook
jupyter notebook aes_uts_capstone_haberlah.ipynb

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import sqlite3
import pickle
import pandas as pd
from pathlib import Path

# Load trained model
with open('models/Ideas_model.pkl', 'rb') as f:
    ideas_model = pickle.load(f)

# Load features for sample essay
with sqlite3.connect('data/aes_uts_capstone_haberlah.db') as conn:
    features = pd.read_sql_query(
        "SELECT * FROM val_features LIMIT 1", 
        conn
    )

# Predict score (0-4)
score = ideas_model.predict(features[feature_columns])[0]
print(f"Ideas score: {score:.2f}")

automated-essay-scoring/
├── README.md                      # Project documentation (this file)
├── requirements.txt               # Python dependencies (14 packages, verified)
├── .gitignore                     # Git exclusions (temp files, caches)
├── .gitattributes                 # Git LFS configuration (for large files)
├── LICENSE                        # MIT License
│
├── data/                          # Dataset & database (Git LFS tracked)
│   └── aes_uts_capstone_haberlah.db      # 159 MB SQLite (15,479 essays)
│
├── models/                        # Trained models (13 files, 3.5 MB total)
│   ├── Ideas_model.pkl                    # Component model (LightGBM)
│   ├── Paragraphs_model.pkl
│   ├── Vocabulary_model.pkl
│   ├── Cohesion_model.pkl
│   ├── TextStructure_model.pkl
│   ├── SentenceStructure_model.pkl
│   ├── Punctuation_model.pkl
│   ├── Spelling_model.pkl
│   ├── Punctuation_difficulty_predictor.pkl       # Meta-model for deferral
│   ├── SentenceStructure_difficulty_predictor.pkl
│   ├── TextStructure_difficulty_predictor.pkl
│   └── Vocabulary_difficulty_predictor.pkl
│
├── notebook/                      # Jupyter analysis (production-ready)
│   └── aes_uts_capstone_haberlah.ipynb   # 2.3 MB notebook
│
└── outputs/                       # Generated artefacts (Git LFS tracked)
    ├── feedback_complete.csv              # 2,322 validation essays + feedback
    ├── feedback_diagnostic.csv            # Sample outputs for testing
    └── [13 performance visualisations]    # Section 5-6 analysis plots

Core tables (4):

1. essays_raw (15,479 records: essay_id, text, Total + 8 component scores)
2. train_split (10,023 essays: 65% stratified by Total score)
3. val_split (2,322 essays: 15%, model development/tuning)
4. holdout_split (3,134 essays: 20%, ONE-TIME final evaluation)

Feature tables (3, engineered linguistics): 5. train_features (10,023 records: 25 features per essay) 6. val_features (2,322 records: 25 features per essay) 7. holdout_features (3,134 records: protected, unused in notebook)

Model artefacts (3, trained results): 8. component_models (8 records: LightGBM hyperparameters, QWK scores) 9. difficulty_predictors (4 records: Punctuation, SentenceStructure, TextStructure, Vocabulary) 10. literature_benchmarks (61 records: academic + commercial reference performance)

Feedback outputs (2, production): 11. validation_feedback (2,322 records: scores, evidence, student/teacher feedback) 12. feedback_errors (error logging table)

Utility tables (5): 13. section_flags (completion tracking) 14. training_session_metadata (timestamps, hyperparameters) 15-17. Intermediate analysis tables

Dataset: 15,479 NAPLAN Year 5 persuasive essays

Cleaning pipeline:

• Null handling: 0 missing scores (complete dataset)
• Text normalisation: whitespace, Unicode standardisation
• Length filtering: 7-word minimum (99.9% retention)
• No content modification: Preserve original spelling/grammar for assessment

Stratified splitting:

• Train: 65% (N=10,023) - model training
• Validation: 15% (N=2,322) - hyperparameter tuning, deferral threshold optimisation
• Holdout: 20% (N=3,134) - ONE-TIME evaluation (protected via database flags)

Stratification: Proportional sampling across 5 Total score bands (0-7, 8-15, 16-23, 24-32) to maintain class balance

Philosophy: NAPLAN-aligned interpretable features (not n-grams)

25 features across 7 categories:

Critical implementation:

• Fit on training only: StandardScaler fitted exclusively on 10,023 training essays
• Transform separately: Validation and holdout transformed using training statistics
• Zero data leakage: No holdout information in any preprocessing step

spaCy pipeline:

• Model: en_core_web_md (685k keys, 20k vectors)
• Loaded on-demand in Section 4 (avoids startup overhead)
• Batch processing: 256 essays per iteration for memory efficiency

Algorithm selection: LightGBM via systematic comparison

Evaluation criteria:

1. Accuracy: Quadratic Weighted Kappa (primary), Pearson r (secondary)
2. Consistency: Performance across all 8 components + Total
3. Efficiency: Training time, prediction latency
4. Tabular suitability: Performance on structured features

Why LightGBM?

• QWK 0.8541 (Total), 6/8 components ≥0.55-0.70 thresholds
• Gradient boosting optimal for tabular data (Grinsztajn et al., 2022; McElfresh et al., 2023)
• Fast inference: <10ms per essay on M3 Max (vs 44.5s for LLM feedback)
• Established in AES literature: e-rater (ETS), IntelliMetric (Pearson)

Training configuration:

• 8 independent component models (no multi-output stacking)
• Stratified 5-fold cross-validation on training set (10,023 essays)
• Objective: regression with L2 loss (ordinal scores 0-4)
• Evaluation metric: Custom QWK calculation (sklearn.metrics.cohen_kappa_score)

Tuned components: TextStructure, Vocabulary, SentenceStructure, Punctuation (underperformers)

Search space:

• num_leaves: [20, 31, 50]
• learning_rate: [0.01, 0.05, 0.1]
• n_estimators: [100, 200, 300]
• min_child_samples: [10, 20, 30]

Result: +0.0000 average QWK improvement across 30 iterations × 4 components

Strategic pivot: Rather than chase marginal model gains, focus on intelligent deferral to achieve deployment thresholds

Core hypothesis: Essays with high prediction error are learnable via feature patterns

Methodology:

1. Train difficulty predictors on training set errors

   • Target: Absolute error |predicted - actual| for each component
   • Features: Same 25 linguistic features used in scoring models
   • Model: LightGBM regressor (difficulty as continuous variable)
   • Critical: Fit difficulty predictor on training set errors ONLY (no validation leakage)

2. Validate on held-out set

   • Predict difficulty scores for validation set (2,322 essays)
   • Measure correlation: r=0.731 (Punctuation), 0.704-0.754 (other components)
   • Visualise: Scatterplots showing difficulty prediction vs actual error

3. Set deferral thresholds

   • Sweep threshold from 0-1 (predicted difficulty)
   • Calculate QWK on retained essays at each threshold
   • Select threshold maximising QWK while minimising deferral rate

Deferral strategies tested:

Deferral policy: Union approach

• If any component triggers difficulty threshold → defer entire essay
• Rationale: Teachers review complete assessments holistically (operational reality)
• Rate: 21.5% (499/2,322 essays) → 6/8 components meet thresholds on retained set

LLM architecture: Qwen3-8B-4bit (4.3GB quantised model)

Why Qwen3 over SmolLM3?

• Reasoning quality: Superior evidence extraction and rubric alignment
• Cost: Latency (35 vs 67 tokens/s) acceptable for overnight batch processing
• Edge deployment: Runs on M2/M3 with 16-32GB RAM

Prompt engineering:

1. Evidence extraction: Identify specific text supporting each component score
2. ACARA alignment: Map scores to 40 rubric descriptors (8 components × 5 levels)
3. Structured output: JSON with student feedback (80-150 words), teacher feedback (100-180 words)

Critical bug fix:

• Problem: 8B parameter AI model praised misspelled words (hallucination)
• Solution: Compute evidence fresh from essay text
• Result: 100% data-driven feedback aligned with actual essay content

Validation:

• 2,322 validation essays processed
• Average latency: 44.5s per essay (36 hours total batch)
• Quality: Manual review of 50 random essays → 94% accuracy in evidence attribution

Comparison to literature:

• Commercial systems: QWK 0.75-0.82 (Chen, 2016; Rudner et al., 2006)
• Human inter-rater: QWK 0.745 (Ormerod et al., 2025)
• This system: QWK 0.861 (exceeds commercial + human baselines)

Deployment thresholds (Williamson et al., 2012; Wilson, 2013; Cozby, 2021):

• Discourse components (Ideas, Paragraphs, Cohesion, TextStructure): QWK ≥0.55
• Lexical components (Vocabulary, Punctuation, Spelling): QWK ≥0.70
• Syntactic components (SentenceStructure): QWK ≥0.65

Key findings:

1. 6/8 components meet deployment thresholds on 78.5% of essays (1,823/2,322 retained)
2. Punctuation shows largest gain: +0.055 QWK improvement via intelligent deferral
3. Vocabulary and SentenceStructure gaps documented: Feature limitations acknowledged

Finding: Prediction difficulty is largely component-independent (mean r=0.086)

Implications:

• Deferral decisions must be component-specific (no global "hard essay" indicator)
• Union policy appropriate: Each component evaluated independently
• Supports modular deployment: Schools can adopt subset of components

Test: Compare difficulty predictions on validation (N=2,322) vs holdout (N=3,134)

Result:

• Validation r=0.731, Holdout r=0.723 (Punctuation difficulty)
• Δ=-0.008 (negligible difference)
• Conclusion: Difficulty predictors generalise reliably to unseen data

Hardware:

• Apple Silicon (M3/M4)
• RAM: 16-32GB
• Storage: 8GB (Qwen3-8B-4bit model + dependencies)
• Latency: 44.5s per essay (current), <10s optimised

For non-Apple Silicon platforms (Linux/Windows):

1. Scoring only (cross-platform):

   • Use LightGBM models directly (no MLX-LM dependency)
   • Deploy via Flask/FastAPI REST API
   • Docker container with python:3.11-slim base

2. Feedback generation alternatives:

   • llama.cpp: GGUF quantised models (Qwen3-8B-Q4_K_M)
   • Transformers + CUDA: Hugging Face pipeline with GPU
   • Cloud API: OpenAI GPT-4, Anthropic Claude (requires data transmission)

3. Example Docker deployment:

   FROM python:3.11-slim
   WORKDIR /app
   COPY requirements.txt .
   RUN pip install --no-cache-dir -r requirements.txt
   RUN python -m spacy download en_core_web_md
   COPY models/ ./models/
   COPY app.py .
   CMD ["python", "app.py"]

Why edge deployment matters:

• FERPA/GDPR compliance: Student essays never leave institutional infrastructure
• Australian DoEs requirements: Data localisation mandates (no third-party transmission)
• Privacy protection: Essay text could contain personally identifiable information (writing style, experiences)
• Institutional control: Schools maintain complete data custody

Cloud alternatives (GPT-4, Claude) require:

• ❌ Third-party data transmission
• ❌ Explicit parental consent for each student
• ❌ Additional contractual safeguards
• ❌ Potential regulatory barriers

Edge deployment advantages:

• ✅ Complete data custody
• ✅ No external API dependencies
• ✅ Predictable latency (no network variability)
• ✅ Cost-effective at scale (no per-request API fees)

1. Platform dependency: Feedback generation requires Apple Silicon (M3/M4)

   • Mitigation: Scoring models are cross-platform
   • Future: Port to llama.cpp for broader compatibility

2. Component gaps (2/8):

   • Vocabulary: -0.049 below threshold (missing academic word sophistication features)
   • SentenceStructure: -0.054 below threshold (missing syntactic depth features)
   • Mitigation: Intelligent deferral ensures these essays reviewed by humans

3. Feedback latency: 44.5s per essay (unoptimised)

   • Target: <10s via prompt caching and quantisation optimisation
   • Current throughput: 81 essays/hour (acceptable for overnight batches)

4. Australian English specific: Spelling validation tuned for Australian conventions

   • Future: Configurable dictionaries for UK/US English variants

Phase 1:

• Implement prompt caching for feedback generation (10× latency reduction)
• Add batch processing API for school deployment
• Create web app for teacher review workflow

Phase 2:

• Port feedback generation to llama.cpp (cross-platform compatibility)
• Enhance Vocabulary features (add academic word sophistication metrics)
• Enhance SentenceStructure features (add parse tree depth analysis)
• Implement SHAP value explanations for interpretability

Phase 3:

• Multi-prompt generalisation testing (beyond NAPLAN persuasive writing)
• Longitudinal student progress tracking
• Integration with DoE assessment workflows
• Publication of academic findings

Research opportunities:

• Conformal prediction for educational assessment (novelty)
• Edge-deployed quantised LLMs for privacy-preserving assessment (novelty)
• Meta-model data leakage in uncertainty quantification (methodological contribution)

If you use this work in your research, please cite:

@misc{haberlah2025aes,
  title={Automated Essay Scoring with Uncertainty Quantification: 
         Intelligent Deferral for Trustworthy Educational AI},
  author={Haberlah, David},
  year={2025},
  note={Data Science Capstone Project},
  url={https://github.com/haberlah/automated-essay-scoring}
}

APA 7th Edition:

Haberlah, D. (2025). Automated essay scoring with uncertainty quantification: Intelligent deferral for trustworthy educational AI [Data science capstone project]. GitHub. https://github.com/haberlah/automated-essay-scoring

Australian Curriculum, Assessment and Reporting Authority. (2015). NAPLAN online pilot study: Technical report. ACARA.

Chen, H. (2016). Automated scoring of writing. In F. Drasgow (Ed.), Technology and testing: Improving educational and psychological measurement (pp. 199–219). Routledge.

Grinsztajn, L., Oyallon, E., & Varoquaux, G. (2022). Why do tree-based models still outperform deep learning on typical tabular data? Advances in Neural Information Processing Systems, 35, 507–520. https://doi.org/10.48550/arXiv.2207.08815

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McElfresh, D., Khandagale, S., Valverde, J., Ramakrishnan, G., Goldblum, M., White, C., & Feamster, N. (2023). When do neural nets outperform boosted trees on tabular data? Advances in Neural Information Processing Systems, 36, 52867–52892.

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Rudner, L. M., Garcia, V., & Welch, C. (2006). An evaluation of IntelliMetric essay scoring system. Journal of Technology, Learning, and Assessment, 4(4), 1–22.

Su, T., Li, Z., Chen, W., Zhang, R., & Liu, Q. (2025). EssayJudge: Multi-trait essay assessment using large language models. Educational Technology Research and Development, 73(2), 445–467. https://doi.org/10.1007/s11423-024-10389-2

Williamson, D. M., Xi, X., & Breyer, F. J. (2012). A framework for evaluation and use of automated scoring. Educational Measurement: Issues and Practice, 31(1), 2–13. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1745-3992.2011.00223.x

This project is licensed under the MIT License - see the LICENSE file for details.

MIT License Summary:

• ✅ Commercial use
• ✅ Modification
• ✅ Distribution
• ✅ Private use
• ⚠️ Liability waiver
• ⚠️ No warranty

Technical Acknowledgements:

• Australian Curriculum, Assessment and Reporting Authority (ACARA): NAPLAN rubric framework and assessment guidelines (publicly available standards: ACELA1504, ACELA1505, ACELA1508)
• spaCy/Explosion: NLP pipeline (en_core_web_md model)
• LightGBM/Microsoft: Gradient boosting framework
• MLX-LM/Apple: Edge-deployable LLM inference on Apple Silicon
• Alibaba Cloud: Qwen3-8B base model

Dataset:

• NAPLAN writing assessment sample data (15,479 expert-marked essays, Year 5 persuasive writing)
• All essays de-identified, developed for educational research purposes

Important Note: This is a research prototype demonstrating uncertainty quantification in automated essay scoring. Operational deployment in educational settings requires additional validation, stakeholder consultation, and appropriate governance frameworks.

• Notebook (NBViewer): View rendered notebook
• GitHub Repository: Source code

Contact: David Haberlah | LinkedIn

Last Updated: November 2025
Version: 1.0.0 (UTS | Institute of Data Capstone Project Submission)