yooo awesome track!
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I kinda liked the entry but I the way the song is structure feels off, like it takes a while for new elements to be introduced and when they do they don't contribute as much to the song as a whole. As a song it doesn't feel cohesive to listen to.
But the overall composition is very charming and the instrumentation really fits with the vibe!
sticking to only pentatonic holds this song waaay too much, the instrumentation really works for the character but the composition feels too simplistic and lacks some sort of structure. That said I think the song has potential, maybe expanding to the minor scale and focusing on a melody could really help out.
I hope to see your next entries in future jams!
I'm very glad to hear that you like my songs and that I didn't disappoint! Although this time around there's nothing much special about my entry, it is very heavily based on kirby music so if you liked it I really recommend listening to the OST of Kirby Super Star or Kirby's Dream land 3. What I like the most about these OSTs are the key changes and chord progressions, and trying to understand them it's what motivated me to start composing in the first place!
About the loop I usually just set a single loop so it's more reviewing friendly and so they don't think I've added something in a new loop, but that's just a personal preference. Anyways thank you very much for listening!