2,5 ⭐️ hot! but, again, i hate the cheesiness. i'm here for the nasty stuff, not the romanticising, justifying, "we're in love and will live happily e2,5 ⭐️ hot! but, again, i hate the cheesiness. i'm here for the nasty stuff, not the romanticising, justifying, "we're in love and will live happily ever after" bananas part. it takes my suspension of disbelief and throws it in the trash, turning the read either uncomfortable or downright cringe-worthy....more
a vampire, a werewolf, and a hunter enter a cemetery... and that's enough for me to be mildly satisfied since i love paranormal stuff. too short and pa vampire, a werewolf, and a hunter enter a cemetery... and that's enough for me to be mildly satisfied since i love paranormal stuff. too short and plain of a story, though - the words aren't enough for even the smut to pay off. i also felt too bad for the hunter to enjoy much of this....more
very freaking engaging for the majority of the first half, but jesus, is it long! as we approach the middle, the problem of such a length for a plot avery freaking engaging for the majority of the first half, but jesus, is it long! as we approach the middle, the problem of such a length for a plot as simple as that truly shows. i won't be finishing this, but the ride was fun, the characters interesting, and i leave feeling like i've read a full-length book.
i was aware of the plot, but some things that weren't in the synopsis made my first attempt at reading dad/son erotica go worse than expected:
1. too i was aware of the plot, but some things that weren't in the synopsis made my first attempt at reading dad/son erotica go worse than expected:
1. too much characters, too little narration - this was, mostly, a list of who went inside each hole in each order. big man 1 entered, big man 1 came, big man 2 entered. literally like that.
2. dad's pov, not son's pov. that one was on the synopsis, but it really reaffirmed my preference: if there's power imbalance or abuse, i don't want the potential abuser's pov (unless you're writing a psychological character study. or you're george r.r. martin). that's not hot.
3. tiktok. if you're worried about posting non-profit tiktok videos, you're too young to consent to an age gap in my book, specially to one with your dad. that's definitely not hot.
4. brother/brother smut. on a scale of 0 to 10, sibling incest is -100 hotness for me.
5. realism. listen, i'm the first one to defend that erotica doesn't need to be realistic, but there's a limit to everyone. my limit is young, inexperienced boys taking a bazillion dicks + two fists up the ass with only some minor discomfort.
6. the STDs the unaware wives will have to deal with later.
pros: everything here is consensual! (refer back to point 3)...more
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