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My Champion by Alanea Alder
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I hate to say it but this is the first time that I didn't like a book by this author. I'm so disappointed by this weak plot, it's not even funny. Where did the smart twists go, where did the no OW drama go, where did the action go and so many more things... :'(
By the end, I just wanted to finish the story and be done with it. Even Meryn, who I actually really like, got on my nerves, since she wasn't as smart as usual and at times she came across even more immature and bitchy. Everyone said how she's a genius but I really didn't see her actions as something special.

At the beginning I liked the way the story unfolded. I always love to see the characters from previous books, so that is always a plus. But after the main characters of this story found each other, the plot went downhill. The unnecessary details from Declans sexual past (and right before they mated, might I add) made this story impossible for me to enjoy. I love Alder's books because she doesn't do drama but in this story I felt like I was reading a book by a whole different author. Kari was a great character and made the whole story a bit better, but still...

That's just how I felt about this book, so that doesn't mean you won't enjoy it. Try it and see for yourself, you might end up liking it more than me. :)




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Reading Progress

December 26, 2016 – Shelved
December 26, 2016 – Shelved as: to-read
December 27, 2016 – Started Reading
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: asshole-hero
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: could-be-better-disappointing
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: don-t-like-the-plot
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: fantasy
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: hero-a-terrible-or-weak-fool
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: hero-over-the-moon-for-h
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: immaturity
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: man-ho
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: meh
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: ow-om-drama
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: paranormal
December 27, 2016 – Shelved as: strong-h
December 27, 2016 –
62.0% ""I wanted something special for my mate." 
"And yet you brought other women here?" 
He shrugged. "I never had sex with them in the bed," he stopped and looked up at the ceiling as if counting. "No not in the bed. Against the bed, one under the bed, one on the nightstand, in the closet, on the bathroom floor, in front of the fireplace..." 

WTF! I so don't need to know that, not when they are about to mate!"
December 29, 2016 – Shelved as: safety-gang-safe
December 29, 2016 – Finished Reading

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Maya ♕Miss A♕ wrote: "LOL enjoy hun"

I'm trying to. ;)


message 2: by Cyndi (new) - added it

Cyndi There is OW drama? That added to his past sexual details makes this a no go for me :(


message 3: by NMmomof4 (new)

NMmomof4 Bummer it didn't work for you, hun! Hope your next one does :)


Lučka I'm not feeling this book right now, because of this weird plot. Thank you for the review.


Maya Cyndi wrote: "There is OW drama? That added to his past sexual details makes this a no go for me :("

There is slight OW drama but it was enough for me to give up on the story.


Maya NMmomof4 wrote: "Bummer it didn't work for you, hun! Hope your next one does :)"

Thank you, love! :)


Maya Lučka (Lucy) wrote: "I'm not feeling this book right now, because of this weird plot. Thank you for the review."

You're welcome, hun! Maybe you'll like the story some time later. :)


message 8: by A. (new)

 A. Sorry it was disappointing, love :(
Great review! xx


Maya Thank you, Anna! :) xx


 Sonya ♕Chatterbooks book blog♕ Sorry this one sucked for you love :( . Terrific review;) xo


message 11: by Maya (new) - rated it 2 stars

Maya Thank you, Sonya! :) xx


message 12: by Judith (new)

Judith Great review,babe.Sorry it wasn't a winner,x


Jessica's Totally Over The Top Book Obsession Great review sweetie :)


message 14: by Maya (new) - rated it 2 stars

Maya Judith wrote: "Great review,babe.Sorry it wasn't a winner,x"

Thank you, love! :) xx


message 15: by Maya (new) - rated it 2 stars

Maya Jessica's wrote: "Great review sweetie :)"

Thank you, doll! :) xx


message 16: by Aisling Zena (new)

Aisling Zena Great honest review hun! :) xx


message 17: by Candace (new)

Candace Great, honest review, Maya! :)


message 18: by Maya (new) - rated it 2 stars

Maya Aisling Zena wrote: "Great honest review hun! :) xx"

Thank you, sweetie! :) xx


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Maya Candace wrote: "Great, honest review, Maya! :)"

Thank you, lovely! :) xx


✦❋Arianna✦❋ Awesome review, lovely! xx


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Maya Arianna✦❋SteamyReadsBlog❋✦ wrote: "Awesome review, lovely! xx"

Thank you, sweetie! :) xx


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Maya Arianna✦❋SteamyReadsBlog❋✦ wrote: "Awesome review, lovely! xx"

Thank you, hun! :D


message 23: by Alp (new)

Alp Sorry it was a bust, Maya. Great honest review, btw. xx


message 24: by Maya (new) - rated it 2 stars

Maya Alp wrote: "Sorry it was a bust, Maya. Great honest review, btw. xx"

Thank you, love! :) xx


Bgurl (don't h8 me cuz I'm honestful) Great review M!


♡Tonya♡ I dropped this series because of this....too bad


message 27: by Maya (new) - rated it 2 stars

Maya ♡Tonya♡ wrote: "I dropped this series because of this....too bad"

Me, too. It's a shame. The first book was so funny and good and I also liked the second one but then I slowly just lost interest in them. :/


♡Tonya♡ Yeah, I hate when authors start resorting to OW/OM nonsense for their drama


Sweet and Salty Reviews by DD I couldn't agree more! Great review!


Leanne I'm almost finished with book but its a struggle to dnf


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