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Intermezzo
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I’m sorry but I had to drop this, I got 100 pages in and couldn’t bear it any longer. It’s just so god-damn overwritten. Every page feels like smashing your head into a brick wall of pointless metaphors and introspections. I don’t know when Sally Rooney forgot about ‘show don’t tell’, but Jesus Christ has she.
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June 3, 2024
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June 3, 2024
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June 5, 2024
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Sep 28, 2024 10:42AM
Thank god it wasn’t just me !!!
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I think I'm there right now, but in terms of metaphors, I have to look closer but I don't think I noticed any similes at all (which could be ok) and there is no metaphorical or figurative language at all. And as for introspection, there's a lot of interior monologue but I dont see much introspection. I mean everyone thinks, but is everyone introspective?
I agree! I got to page 124 and it was so slow, droning on with words that just talk in circles about nothing. So disappointing I was excited to read this but couldn’t get through any longer had to DROP
Agree, DNF for me as well. Life is too short to read something that feels like such a slog to get through!
I'm trying to fight on. I haven't DNF a book in a while. But life is short and there are better books for me to read.
I couldn’t make it past the first few pages. I don’t understand this style of writing. It hurts my brain.
I’m on page 75 and really battling I’ve been picking it up and putting it down all week. I’ve come here to read the reviews to see if I should persevere. I think it may be a dnf as can’t stand the short sharp two/three word sentences