A very sweet and sexy short story, with a plot thankfully very different from the norm.
What I loved the most was the way the author gave Sweet and hot
A very sweet and sexy short story, with a plot thankfully very different from the norm.
What I loved the most was the way the author gave dimension to characters in such a short book. Needless to say, the writing was great. And the smut was HOT!...more
Cute but too much on the feelings. The way the plot was weaved made it that they were saying I love yous when they've said only like ten wordCrazy OTT
Cute but too much on the feelings. The way the plot was weaved made it that they were saying I love yous when they've said only like ten words to each other. And that lack of connection made the smut feel flat ...more
There's not much more to say than it's funny and sexy. Well written, this is the typical mountain man short story: absurd insta love withFunny and sexy
There's not much more to say than it's funny and sexy. Well written, this is the typical mountain man short story: absurd insta love with some spice....more
4.5 stars The level of obsession this guy has for her is on another level. Well, maybe within the crazy obsessed alphas, but the way it's wriObsession
4.5 stars The level of obsession this guy has for her is on another level. Well, maybe within the crazy obsessed alphas, but the way it's written seems more.
Lots of spice in this short book, with room for a little plot too. Super entertaining....more
DNF I'm rating because my problems with the book were not going away the more I read it.
At 10%, there were already 16 paragraphs repeating the exact DNF I'm rating because my problems with the book were not going away the more I read it.
At 10%, there were already 16 paragraphs repeating the exact same thing (I went back and checked, then gave up at that stage).
The book starts in the middle of some other plot I'm not aware of. No worries, the worst is not that, it's the characters: the most spoiled, naive in the sense of spoiled (it's worth mentioning twice), whiny, dumb and dumber and dumbest FMC. Example: she was kidnapped. Her problem? throwing a tantrum because she doesn't have clean underwear (apparently she's never did laundry in her life... she could wash them in the sink) or her myriad of hair products.
The MMC is a caricature of an alpha male. The traits are there, but creepily out of place.
I just couldn't anymore. Kindle freebies are never worth it, I should learn....more
Dnf @ 60% so I'm rating. A new kink I didn't know existed. One that I hated and that involves bodily fluids,cribs and Wtf?! Diapers!?!? And no warning??
Dnf @ 60% so I'm rating. A new kink I didn't know existed. One that I hated and that involves bodily fluids,cribs and pacifiers. To each their own, but for me this is disgusting and degrading. Dnfed immediately
Wouldn't have read if I was warned, but noooo let's not advise ppl and assume they know all the kinky shit out there!!! And that's why this has 1 star...more
Wow! I did NOT expect great plot, world building, character development and writing!
I thought this was just a short smutty palate cleanser. Nope. StilWow! I did NOT expect great plot, world building, character development and writing!
I thought this was just a short smutty palate cleanser. Nope. Still smutty, but very good! I was transported to that universe and lived with the characters. I think you can't ask much more from a book....more