It's painful to read the atrocious and telegraphic writing.
Its painful to read the most ridiculous attempt at a decent plot, where So bad it's painful
It's painful to read the atrocious and telegraphic writing.
Its painful to read the most ridiculous attempt at a decent plot, where everything is all over the place and nothing is resolved. Like a pre-teen wanted to recreate a serious book and grabbed some clichés without knowing how to make them work.
It's painful to read about the most flat characters ever.
So painful that I started skimming to the dialogs after 50%. And this is the only way I could finish this book.
He calls her a liar and a dirty slut and in the same page they are in bed. Several times. They do not communicate and the whole villain thing was unfinished.
The smut was terrible. Telegraphic. It's was bad. ...more
4.5⭐ I'll write a proper review later, so these are notes to myself:
Great writing, too bad is third person POV. Awesome description of the environment,4.5⭐ I'll write a proper review later, so these are notes to myself:
Great writing, too bad is third person POV. Awesome description of the environment, you can really smell the sea. Great characters. Very character driven story, fmc reinventing herself Great side characters No smut, just some almost ftb scenes....more
This is indeed a quick read and a lovely and sweet story of broken people finding each other. The smexyness is good (not great thoughSweet short story
This is indeed a quick read and a lovely and sweet story of broken people finding each other. The smexyness is good (not great though) and the characters lovely.
The backstory was good but the third act "scare" was a bit forced. To be expected in these types of novels though....more
It's a nice predictable story, more focused on the crime and suspense action than in the (barely there)romance.
The possessNot really a shifter romance
It's a nice predictable story, more focused on the crime and suspense action than in the (barely there)romance.
The possessive OTT shifter who finds his mate is NOT here. He can shift, but that's all we get from the type of romance I thought i was going into. No showing the development relationship or the obsession.
Almost no smexy too. A two paragraph (tops) duration written with cringe metaphors....more
WTF?!? Is this a complete novella? Somebody deleted 3 or 4 chapters? They go on a date, have sex and then it's over. No development, no idea what they WTF?!? Is this a complete novella? Somebody deleted 3 or 4 chapters? They go on a date, have sex and then it's over. No development, no idea what they told the kids, no epilogue. Nothing!!!!!...more
Yes, DNF at 17% because the writing is cringe, the repetitions of the basics are abundant and everything feels childishly put togetheDnf a short story
Yes, DNF at 17% because the writing is cringe, the repetitions of the basics are abundant and everything feels childishly put together. So much second hand embarrassment that i had to put this down...more
It was a bit hard for me to get into this book. It starts with a somewhat terrified girl being auctioned off at a sex club by 3 ⭐ + 1 ⭐ just for Luke.
It was a bit hard for me to get into this book. It starts with a somewhat terrified girl being auctioned off at a sex club by her abusive dom. Luke does anything to win her and they have a "magical night". The premise was good, but somehow I didn't connect.
It all changed at around 30%. From there on I really liked this sweet and smutty novella.
Luke is absolutely dreamyyyyy and funny and sexy and perfect.
Third person POV but surprisingly not annoying....more
So, we have a girl ready to CHEAT on her boyfriend with her best friend (yeah, the blurb leaves that out) but when she goes to jump himWhat was this!?
So, we have a girl ready to CHEAT on her boyfriend with her best friend (yeah, the blurb leaves that out) but when she goes to jump him and kiss him they fall on the ground and the police interrupt so no deal. They have a telepathic conversation (lololol the level of ridicule) and the book ends. It's like the prologue of a normal book, not a short story.
This is a nothing book. I feel cheated. I feel like someone is taking me for stupid.
These kindle freebies are getting more and more ridiculous....more
It was entertaining and that's the only reason it's getting 3 stars and not 2.
The third person POV is terrible, but worse is that the woSlowwwwww burn
It was entertaining and that's the only reason it's getting 3 stars and not 2.
The third person POV is terrible, but worse is that the world was only barely built and still they only get together at 85-90%. They first kiss at 60% but are not really together.