2.5 stars This was an ok MFM book. I thought I was picking up a short, smutty read but there was actually a decent amount of story with it. Though it s2.5 stars This was an ok MFM book. I thought I was picking up a short, smutty read but there was actually a decent amount of story with it. Though it started out a little slow and I felt like the story, in general, was missing some depth.
There was just more that didn't work for me than did with this one. Specifically, the conflict seemed weak. I actually thought the history of Irving helping Opal would be more problematic once she found out but it turned out to be not that big of a deal. There was a lack of contractions in conversational quotes (I found myself reading them with it to help flow better). Also, how Opal started out so meek and shy but one little pep talk from Cal and all the sudden she's brazen and takes what she wants. Plus, words like "flank" and "furrow" threw me from the story in addition to some grammatical errors.
I reallllly try to not DNF a book though so finish this one I did and per usual I was glad to see Opal, Irving, and Cal get their HEA. I was happy there was an epilogue to give us a glimpse into the future, to see how everything turned out with their project and life. ...more
I loved the hot, steamy sex in this one because Sierra knows how to write menage fo sho. I'll take me a Caleb and Ben sandwich, please! Caleb with hisI loved the hot, steamy sex in this one because Sierra knows how to write menage fo sho. I'll take me a Caleb and Ben sandwich, please! Caleb with his sensitive, caring side and Ben with his brooding bossiness. This was mostly MFM though a touch MMF based on Caleb and Ben's closeness and a kiss that takes place.
I struggle with any story that's insta-love and this 100% one of those instances. The story felt rushed and like I didn't get much of a glimpse into the growth of their relationship, the feelings outside of lust. I also wish Ireland could have overcome her insecurities sooner so it wasn't still a forefront issue at the end of the book.
All in all a good book and totally worth picking up if you're looking for a hot read....more
Holy hot-and-steamy-oh-my-my!! I may or may not be still fanning myself from that one. If you're looking for hot sex with, count 'em, TWO hot men thenHoly hot-and-steamy-oh-my-my!! I may or may not be still fanning myself from that one. If you're looking for hot sex with, count 'em, TWO hot men then check out A TABLE FOR THREE by Lainey Reese. I've just added Trevor and Cade to my boyfriend of the week club. Enjoy :)...more