A romance writer out of a bad relationship who vowed to never marry and a billionaire who thinks relationships are the devil meet when both travellingA romance writer out of a bad relationship who vowed to never marry and a billionaire who thinks relationships are the devil meet when both travelling to one of his hotel for her book adaptation to screen and sparks fly.
It had some clichés, but not too much and the plot was actually realistic (for a romance novel, of course). The way their relationship developed and what they thought of it was rather realistic.
There was a good character development, especially for the MMC.
It's third person POV which I don't like at all. Surprisingly, this one was well done and didn't bother me as much as usual. Didn't love all the past perfect tense paragraphs. No need for those. ...more
A cute a sexy novella where the author knew how to build tension, even there being a certain insta-love aspect. Great characters, nice plot (it actuallA cute a sexy novella where the author knew how to build tension, even there being a certain insta-love aspect. Great characters, nice plot (it actually has a plot) and awesome smexy.
It's cute but way too fast. We didn't even see the first kiss... only mentioned. Lovely characters and hot MMC.It's cute but way too fast. We didn't even see the first kiss... only mentioned. Lovely characters and hot MMC....more
This is basically smut with and attempt at a plot. It wouldn't be bad if the smut was better and the plot actually made sense. PLEASE read the triggerThis is basically smut with and attempt at a plot. It wouldn't be bad if the smut was better and the plot actually made sense. PLEASE read the trigger warnings (although they're insufficient) and read the reviews. I only read the former and it didn't really bother me, but I should've read the reviews first.
I'll copy here some excerpts with which I totally agree:
Hanna: "You introduce the guy called the “god eater” the monsters fear but a HAG is the one who gets the better of the dragon??? Bruh Alex: I am a fan of monster smut, but the lack of structure and info dumping was just too much."
Ciru: "There was a lot of info dumping, inner monologue and then towards the end repetition, which serves to swell the book but in actual sense, not a lot of world building has actually taken place. This is basically Drago's book. And we still have Mayce, Kyan and finally the stereotypical bad mate, Merik, stories to get through; which doesn't bode well with the pacing of the story.
Then people are in robes, gowns then all of a sudden leather jackets and jeans? They don't have conventional indoor plumbing but in another scene Quinn talks of DNA??"
The world buiding was atrocious, the plot holes were plotting and the pacing (considering we have 3 more books) is not the best.
HOWEVER, I liked the characters very much. I think Quinn is smart, curious, inhibited, unproblematic but very sassy (intelligent sassy). I also loved her relationship with her Shadow almost until the end. The MMCs were cool. I loved Draco, but this book is centered on him. The others are there as landscape almost.
The smut was mostly hot!!! Beware, it is dark and there is dubcon, but I didn't mind it considering the aftercare and the dynamics between them. There were some impossible and totally unreal situations, which dragged the quality down. Also, it got repetitive at a point because it was all the same. Well, not much, but some.
I will NOT read any other book in this series. ...more
The plot revolved more around bratva business and her family than their relationship. Every aspect of both was unfinished, just mentioned or irrelevanThe plot revolved more around bratva business and her family than their relationship. Every aspect of both was unfinished, just mentioned or irrelevant.
Their relationship was forced and nothing flowed. The smut was quick and sparce.
Seriously, I'm worried for the FMC's health! She keeps leaking everywhere and at every time!!! Some plumber should really fiTacky and too much leaking
Seriously, I'm worried for the FMC's health! She keeps leaking everywhere and at every time!!! Some plumber should really fix that, I bet she's spent her life dehydrated.
Aside from the FMC's health problem that keeps spoiling clothes and staining surfaces, the book was too tacky, even for the genre....more
The plot is cute and somewhat different, the characters are really great and the writing is very good. However, being a noveCould've been a longer book
The plot is cute and somewhat different, the characters are really great and the writing is very good. However, being a novella some things were only told not shown. I needed a bit more.
Sooooo awful. I'm not sure this isn't a Wattpad story written by a 14 year old trying to copy smutty MC books.
The writing is awful anSo incredibly bad
Sooooo awful. I'm not sure this isn't a Wattpad story written by a 14 year old trying to copy smutty MC books.
The writing is awful and juvenile, the dialogs cringe, the smut short and sad... really forced and cold
The attempted at a plot is sad and the closure sadder. Very very ridiculous. I just didn't DNF cause it was 75 pages.
I know I'm being harsh. I'm just mad that I got this book because it had good reviews. People forget that their reviews are not only (and not especially) for the author, but to other readers who may be advised about what they do and don't like (some bad reviews made buy I book more than once. What they hated is what I like.)....more
Very cute with a level headed and mature MMC. Super sexy too. However, the POV is third person, which annoys me. The writing was very basic, but I'mCute
Very cute with a level headed and mature MMC. Super sexy too. However, the POV is third person, which annoys me. The writing was very basic, but I'm not gonna complain too much because it's a 40 page short story ...more
Sooooo bad. Writing is dreadful, the plot nonexistent and the smut flat. Boring as hell. And it's only 63 pages!!!! Of course, of those, 45 are tSo bad
Sooooo bad. Writing is dreadful, the plot nonexistent and the smut flat. Boring as hell. And it's only 63 pages!!!! Of course, of those, 45 are total filler. 5 pages on the important tasks of creating centerpieces. 5 more to introduce and describe all the family. 5 others to describe food. Wtf?!?!...more