i couldn’t get over the fact that she just invites this man she doesn’t know to come back home with her even if she did wake up married, girl he couldi couldn’t get over the fact that she just invites this man she doesn’t know to come back home with her even if she did wake up married, girl he could be a serial killer. ...more
yeah this is literal shit, like shit from the butt.
the writing is absolutely terrible! the main characters is 22 but talks like a millennial. honestlyeah this is literal shit, like shit from the butt.
the writing is absolutely terrible! the main characters is 22 but talks like a millennial. honestly calling it millennial feels like a stretch because the characters just feel so immature. like why are you saying “mouthfuck” instead of makeout and describing a guy as “fuckhot” don’t even get me started on the main character calling her vagina a “beaver” im literally so mad like you cannot be serious bruh. also the author doesn’t know how to make a point and then leave it, for example why did the main character have to tell us a million times in a million ways that her step brother was a whore and dumb? she thinks she’s so much smarter than hockey players just because they’re jocks, why are we stereotyping? not to mention she slut shamed everyone like the book doesn’t start off with her masturbating and then she also makes out with the first guy she sees but oh yeah the puck bunny’s are so slutty. just an overall shitty book i’m so mad omg...more
actually surprised at how good this was, even when i thought that at the 50% mark things were moving a bit too fast it still managed to hold my attentactually surprised at how good this was, even when i thought that at the 50% mark things were moving a bit too fast it still managed to hold my attention also that one sex scene was a bit too cringe for my liking but whatever. i thought this was very entertaining and this had some tropes i enjoy ...more
the dialogue was so terrible but i wouldn’t necessarily say it was badly written? i’ve read from this author before but the writing here just felt juvthe dialogue was so terrible but i wouldn’t necessarily say it was badly written? i’ve read from this author before but the writing here just felt juvenile. it also felt rushed like the author wanted to jump immediately from the introduction into the smut which is fine i just wish the author took more time to make things feel more realistic. i kept pausing the story to think “why are they letting this happen” and “how likely is this to happen”. i know this is fiction and literally smut so it doesn’t matter but i just prefer my books with a wee bit more effort ...more
if i had a nickel for every time the FMC’s sister was getting married to her ex and the FMC fell in love with his best friend. i would have two nickelif i had a nickel for every time the FMC’s sister was getting married to her ex and the FMC fell in love with his best friend. i would have two nickels which is nice but it’s weird that it happened twice right?
anyways this was kinda lack luster to me, there was like no christmas spirit fr here like i kept forgetting this was a christmas book and i thought the romance was subpar at best. it annoyed me that she had no real reason to dislike the MMC and it felt like she was just making shit up but then it was insta-love anyway so what was the point really?...more
i tried my best to give this author a decent chance but i just don’t like her writing. the beginning of the book (like literally the first few chapteri tried my best to give this author a decent chance but i just don’t like her writing. the beginning of the book (like literally the first few chapters) were so slow it felt like it took me forever to get to the point. the two main characters chemistry was just extremely lacking to me and there was several moments where i physically cringed. it’s so unfortunate because marriage of convenience and accidental marriage is my favorite trope but this was just soo boring ...more
this book does a LOT of telling instead of showing and it feels a bit lazy tbh. either that or the author just isn’t that good. i feel like this book this book does a LOT of telling instead of showing and it feels a bit lazy tbh. either that or the author just isn’t that good. i feel like this book was just poorly written in general. it was really corny and there was some writing choices that had me rolling my eyes. outside of the writing i think this book has potential, it was interesting and i liked their romance dynamic ...more
mostly read this because the cover looks like steve harrington, surprisingly this was pretty good and i enjoyed it for the most part. i did find the mmostly read this because the cover looks like steve harrington, surprisingly this was pretty good and i enjoyed it for the most part. i did find the multiple taylor swift name drops and references overwhelmingly annoying. lastly, i found that it could be a bit corny at times but i really liked the romance and the smut was good to me!...more
pretty solid adult debut from this author! i definitely would be up to read more by her in the future. i’m not really into murder mysteries 3.5 stars!
pretty solid adult debut from this author! i definitely would be up to read more by her in the future. i’m not really into murder mysteries but this was fine, i really liked the romance. ...more
the main character in this book annoyed the LIFE out of me like i think other people will be fine with her but for some reason she frustrated me a lotthe main character in this book annoyed the LIFE out of me like i think other people will be fine with her but for some reason she frustrated me a lot and i thought the miscommunication in the beginning was stupid...more