the dialogue was so terrible but i wouldn’t necessarily say it was badly written? i’ve read from this author before but the writing here just felt juvthe dialogue was so terrible but i wouldn’t necessarily say it was badly written? i’ve read from this author before but the writing here just felt juvenile. it also felt rushed like the author wanted to jump immediately from the introduction into the smut which is fine i just wish the author took more time to make things feel more realistic. i kept pausing the story to think “why are they letting this happen” and “how likely is this to happen”. i know this is fiction and literally smut so it doesn’t matter but i just prefer my books with a wee bit more effort ...more
this started off pretty interesting but then it ended up being 600 pages on my kindle which should be illegal! idgaf what’s going on, no romance book this started off pretty interesting but then it ended up being 600 pages on my kindle which should be illegal! idgaf what’s going on, no romance book should be over 320 pages and these authors must be stopped. ...more
i think the main character was slightly annoying and how much they talked about how special and different she was got annoying bc she didn’t even embai think the main character was slightly annoying and how much they talked about how special and different she was got annoying bc she didn’t even embarrass it. it also got so predictable with the crazy ex boyfriend and judgemental mom trope but other than that the romance was good and it was nice how the guys were slowly introduced. this was really fun. ...more
this was fun and good, a lot of build up for the next books but listen i’m ready for some SMUT okay? that’s what i came here for and it delivered i juthis was fun and good, a lot of build up for the next books but listen i’m ready for some SMUT okay? that’s what i came here for and it delivered i just needed it to deliver reverse haram smut...more
i feel like i’m missing something? like everyone is giving it 5 stars but it just was not that good to me? i found 80% of it boring and idk :/ i’m goii feel like i’m missing something? like everyone is giving it 5 stars but it just was not that good to me? i found 80% of it boring and idk :/ i’m going to give the authors other books a try. ...more
man was this good, i LOVE MK as the main character and i especially love Kodak, Arch and Steele. Even Bri and Dallas i wish i didn’t have to sleep so man was this good, i LOVE MK as the main character and i especially love Kodak, Arch and Steele. Even Bri and Dallas i wish i didn’t have to sleep so i could immediately start the next book because this was so so good...more
this book lowkey had hella typos which is.. concerning
i was kind of let down by this book, kinda because this book has been hyped up so much. i likedthis book lowkey had hella typos which is.. concerning
i was kind of let down by this book, kinda because this book has been hyped up so much. i liked Cecilia she was a good main character to read from. i did not like Sean, i don’t like how he talks in riddles and i think he’s boring. I also don’t care for their relationship when it was just them but i did like them when Dominic was there....more
this was so much fun, i loved the main character, i loved the relationship between the main character and the love interests as well as the developmenthis was so much fun, i loved the main character, i loved the relationship between the main character and the love interests as well as the development they had with each other. everything was well paced and i didn’t feel like i left the book with any questions. idk how i feel about that penelope douglas esque thriller but whatever. ...more
i think that this book would’ve been best as a collage series, so much of it was very unrealistic for high school? once again too much was going on ani think that this book would’ve been best as a collage series, so much of it was very unrealistic for high school? once again too much was going on and i LOVE drama....more
this was most definitely a filler book, the fact that EVERYONE is in love with her is so annoying but i love the friendships and schemes they get intothis was most definitely a filler book, the fact that EVERYONE is in love with her is so annoying but i love the friendships and schemes they get into too much to really care....more
okay so at first going into this i was mad uncomfortable at first because they were 15 in this book but i kept reading because i’ve read some of the aokay so at first going into this i was mad uncomfortable at first because they were 15 in this book but i kept reading because i’ve read some of the authors other work. but yoooooo this book had so much drama!! it was like if gossip girl was in a boarding school....more
time to pack my shit and move to the mountains in colorado with three men, on my mama mia shit. i think i really connected with the main character in time to pack my shit and move to the mountains in colorado with three men, on my mama mia shit. i think i really connected with the main character in this book and that’s why i enjoyed it so much. i surprisingly don’t really talk a lot and it’s actually a running joke in my family that i’m emotionless.
okay but on to the actual review, i need to be CLEANSED after reading this book like it was so dirty and i enjoyed every part of it like why?? i’m a little salty because she didn’t get with all of them. okay a few things i didn’t like was the consent issue in this book, like she has to continuously say stop and we know that she doesn’t really want to because she thinks it but she still has to say it a lot. i also hate the “i’m not like other girls” thing penelope douglas does in this book but it’s in a way where shes something new and different in this small town so everyone wants her.
also, just like in corrupt the villain was very like. but i did really enjoy the end and i was actually happy with who she ended up with because when i finally realized she doesn’t get all of them i did end up hoping for one guy and it made me happy they were “endgame” anyways miss douglas continues to write better men than the actual ones in real life and i’m okay with that. i can’t wait to see what else she comes out with and i also can’t wait to finally pick up ‘birthday girl’ and ‘punk 57’...more